The Aspen Grove Murders
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Aspen Grove Murders #16"A Tommy Thompson Mystery
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Well, sounds like this has taken an interesting twist - a blind detective. She'll probably solve the case simply because she is NOT relying on her eyes to blind her as to what's taking place.
The honeymoon was written in a very romantic way. Nicely done, Sal!
Have a good week writing - look forward to reading about the new detective.
Pam
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Well, sounds like this has taken an interesting twist - a blind detective. She'll probably solve the case simply because she is NOT relying on her eyes to blind her as to what's taking place.
The honeymoon was written in a very romantic way. Nicely done, Sal!
Have a good week writing - look forward to reading about the new detective.
Pam
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you, dear Pam. I?m so glad you enjoyed this chapter. My six books before this are my Blind Girl Mysteries. I have posted them all on FanStory first before publishing most of them. I have five on Amazon Books and Kindle, and three are on Audible. My latest on Audible was yesterday. I have an blindness fundraising event coming up and book signing so I am very happy to have a teaser about my latest, Tommy Thompson mystery (which will have me in it for a few chapters as the blind detective.) Many of my followers are very excited about this addition to the new book. I am having fun with this book and hope you can join in from time to time.
Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal XOs
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You're quite accomplished, Sal. I admire you:-)
xxoo
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Willa's storyline with her first boyfriend was written well, Sally. A lovely romantic honeymoon story. I'm looking forward to the Blind Detective being involved in this case.
Great chapter.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Willa's storyline with her first boyfriend was written well, Sally. A lovely romantic honeymoon story. I'm looking forward to the Blind Detective being involved in this case.
Great chapter.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it all. Yes, I will be coming in to help. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Ahhh, so Sally Law's on the case again! They are in good hands now!
Nice romantic scene with the happily wed couple! What a sweet family starting.
I love the way you switch between scenes. It keeps the interest going.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Ahhh, so Sally Law's on the case again! They are in good hands now!
Nice romantic scene with the happily wed couple! What a sweet family starting.
I love the way you switch between scenes. It keeps the interest going.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous six star rating. It means so much to me that you enjoy my work. I am blown away by your kindness.
Thank you again, and God bless you real good, dear Rhonda.
Sal XOs
Comment from lyenochka
Yay! We'll finally get Sally, the blind detective on the case!
I'm not into the romance or the wedding thing but was happy to see Debi and Glen at the party. I also liked that Tommy's sister will join the force. Seems like a great team is put together here!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Yay! We'll finally get Sally, the blind detective on the case!
I'm not into the romance or the wedding thing but was happy to see Debi and Glen at the party. I also liked that Tommy's sister will join the force. Seems like a great team is put together here!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and delightful stars, dear Helen. I am honored and blessed, my friend. How kind of you to save a precious six. Sending you my very best and blessings to you all.
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
Another exciting chapter of the Aspen Grove Murders. (I really like the name of that town, by the way!) The wedding sounds wonderful and the honeymoon even better. I'm eager to learn more about the blind, cold case detective,
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Another exciting chapter of the Aspen Grove Murders. (I really like the name of that town, by the way!) The wedding sounds wonderful and the honeymoon even better. I'm eager to learn more about the blind, cold case detective,
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, the Blind Detective will be appearing in the next chapter. I?m glad you?re enjoying it all. Sending along my very best, Sally.
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You are welcome. I look forward to the next chapter--keep 'em coming!
Comment from Jay Squires
I commend you, Sally! Your honeymoon scene was handled with delicacy, even with Willa's confession to Tommy. I don't see why this required any notification of sexual content. (Though ... as you might guess ... some might be drawn to it because of the warning. If they were disappointed, they need to check with their therapists!)
"I like her already."
"I do too. Here's the kicker--she's blind." [Ah-ha! could we have a little character crossover from one novel to the next? This is going to be interesting, Sally.]
This is a perfect addition to your novel.
Jay
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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I commend you, Sally! Your honeymoon scene was handled with delicacy, even with Willa's confession to Tommy. I don't see why this required any notification of sexual content. (Though ... as you might guess ... some might be drawn to it because of the warning. If they were disappointed, they need to check with their therapists!)
"I like her already."
"I do too. Here's the kicker--she's blind." [Ah-ha! could we have a little character crossover from one novel to the next? This is going to be interesting, Sally.]
This is a perfect addition to your novel.
Jay
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Dear Jay, thank Yu our so much for the lovely review and super stars! I'm so very blessed. Thanks for what said about the sexual content warning. I wanted to be more safe and sensitive to my followers than sorry. I don't usually go there in my writing. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from BethShelby
So the blind lady is going to be a part of this story after all. That is good because I've been missing her. The wedding and honeymoon seemed lovely. I 'm really enjoying the story and thanks for encluding the Casablanca clip. It brings back memories.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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So the blind lady is going to be a part of this story after all. That is good because I've been missing her. The wedding and honeymoon seemed lovely. I 'm really enjoying the story and thanks for encluding the Casablanca clip. It brings back memories.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter. I?m glad you enjoyed it in the movie clip. Sending along my very best, Sally xo
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
This excellent chapter reflect the true love these two have for each other.
You handled the sex scene very nicely.
Good luck with all you write!
Blessings, ð?¤? hugs
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Sally,
This excellent chapter reflect the true love these two have for each other.
You handled the sex scene very nicely.
Good luck with all you write!
Blessings, ð?¤? hugs
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the excellent review and thoughtful comments, Cindy dear. Both are so appreciated.
Blessings to you always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The honeymoon is over for Willa and Tom, or did it just begin? They sound like a nice couple full of expectations. Toward the end of the chapter, the blind girl is coming to aide help to the police force....a good chapter.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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The honeymoon is over for Willa and Tom, or did it just begin? They sound like a nice couple full of expectations. Toward the end of the chapter, the blind girl is coming to aide help to the police force....a good chapter.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the kind review in my book chapter. So glad you enjoyed it. Yes, the blind girl is coming for a visit. Sending love my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Tom Horonzy
To write a book take patience and it is obvious you have what is needed. I normally bypass longer chapters. Concentration for periods longer than 300 words leaves me usually though I like what is written here.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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To write a book take patience and it is obvious you have what is needed. I normally bypass longer chapters. Concentration for periods longer than 300 words leaves me usually though I like what is written here.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review of my book chapter. It is most appreciated. Blessings,
Sal :))