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Nicki Nance
Well done. Iappreciate the work that went into telling this story in Paradelle form. The story itself ended in a mystery, and I would love to know what you would have put in a fifth stanza.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
Yes, this paradelle was such a challenge, but I did want to give it a try. I appreciate your dropping by to share your feedback.