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AP Apgar
I like your spring modern - good picture presentation- excellent flow - poets last haiku glides in warm spring breeze- nice
(5 syllables?) 5/5/7 very nice Good Job AP
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
Yes, 5+5+7=17 Haiku is 17 syllables or less.
Thank you very much for your time, kind words, and excellent review.
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