Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Death By Murder - Chap 27"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter to see how all these threads come together. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter to see how all these threads come together. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for your kindness and the review. I am thrilled that you continue to enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another excellent chapter to read. Those diamonds are certainly causing many problems, including dead people. I am waiting for the next installment. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Another excellent chapter to read. Those diamonds are certainly causing many problems, including dead people. I am waiting for the next installment. Have a blessed Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Oh, Shirley... I am thrilled with your response to this chapter especially since I am under the weather and feared I might have gotten off track. I am so blessed!
Never fear... romance dances in the wings and it won't be all dead people. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Emmy is smitten with Hank, that's why she'll take the road trip with him. I really like this story.
Wyatt' appears to be much bigger than that, my friend. What did you neglect to tell me?" (not sure why the ' ' ' is there after Wyatt)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Emmy is smitten with Hank, that's why she'll take the road trip with him. I really like this story.
Wyatt' appears to be much bigger than that, my friend. What did you neglect to tell me?" (not sure why the ' ' ' is there after Wyatt)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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A correction that went wrong!
I have to watch my Grammerly... it tends to tell me I need something in one spot and put it in another. More trouble than I need.
You should like the road trip - romance in the Smokies and possibly Garth on the scene soon.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
I'm still reading your story, and still finding it interesting enough to continue. Now, poor Chrissy and Brandi are involved in the mess. I am truly wondering where you are going with the story.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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I'm still reading your story, and still finding it interesting enough to continue. Now, poor Chrissy and Brandi are involved in the mess. I am truly wondering where you are going with the story.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Trenton, Tennessee, of course! LOL
And a lot of story writing with twists and turns to keep you interested my friend. There's love brewing in many places and evil lurking around the corner as well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I wonder if Crissy's life will be in danger for being someone who knows to much. I was a little surprised that Hank didn't seem to be thinking a lot about the call he got from her early whild talking to his partner. I assume that is what the road trip is all about though.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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I wonder if Crissy's life will be in danger for being someone who knows to much. I was a little surprised that Hank didn't seem to be thinking a lot about the call he got from her early whild talking to his partner. I assume that is what the road trip is all about though.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Crissy called Garth not Hank.... he doesn't even know what is developing down the road ... at least not yet. It's easy to get all the changing characters confused... I do it too!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
Okay, It seems to me that most of these characters will collide at some point, and revelations will be discovered. I can't wait to find them out! I love this saga! Best, JohnC
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Okay, It seems to me that most of these characters will collide at some point, and revelations will be discovered. I can't wait to find them out! I love this saga! Best, JohnC
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Yes, you are right that at some point they will collide, but there is so much more to unravel as the pot bubbles and brews. Thank you once again for enjoying. Have a great day, John.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
They don't know what they are headed into! Now we have a very worried police deputy, Wyatt, and another worked up Terry is worked up now, as well. And both of them should be, in fact, they should be very, very worried now!! They have no idea that the 'woman and her dog' has already spoken to Garth, an FBI man, and soon this whole thing most definitely will explode!! Excellent chapter, Carol, and I'm looking forward to more. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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They don't know what they are headed into! Now we have a very worried police deputy, Wyatt, and another worked up Terry is worked up now, as well. And both of them should be, in fact, they should be very, very worried now!! They have no idea that the 'woman and her dog' has already spoken to Garth, an FBI man, and soon this whole thing most definitely will explode!! Excellent chapter, Carol, and I'm looking forward to more. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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As always, I am blessed by you my sweet friend. Thank you for your most generous comments and the stars. Not one single character knows where this is headed and how it is going to affect so many lives... over some diamonds.
Sending all my love and thanks to you today and for the holiday. I hope it is one of the best ever and the New Year brings you joy, peace and happiness.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mario PIERRE
This is the 3rd chapter review I wrote about the story and it becomes very clear that your story is solid, with a strong premise. The writing style is great and it's very enjoyable to read.
Great work.
Mario
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This is the 3rd chapter review I wrote about the story and it becomes very clear that your story is solid, with a strong premise. The writing style is great and it's very enjoyable to read.
Great work.
Mario
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for continuing to follow the story and to appreciate it. The reader's enjoyment is my success. I am glad you like it.
Smiles, Carol
