Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Death By Murder - Chap 25"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
24 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You have moved the story along nicely. I do not see any need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. You have moved the story along nicely. I do not see any need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. Appreciate it so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. Certain htreads are being woven together,and she did well to get onto Garth - he will be helpful. Were the louts involved in her accident also trying to get rid of her? Looking forward to reading more.
Wendy
Typo: May you should try another number? ("Maybe_")
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Well done. Certain htreads are being woven together,and she did well to get onto Garth - he will be helpful. Were the louts involved in her accident also trying to get rid of her? Looking forward to reading more.
Wendy
Typo: May you should try another number? ("Maybe_")
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Love the new pic...(or at least new to me). Very nice!
Fixed the skipped word and thank you!
The Towncar was Bruiser trying to catch up with Lance and Bennie with no care for anyone else on the road. It was just a little tidbit that Chrissy can remember to give Garth. Got to track those guys down or it might be too late.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
It sounded like Chrissy had an accident herself. That's how her dog found the dead body. I hope she didn't have to repair her own car but she got a story to investigate and write about.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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It sounded like Chrissy had an accident herself. That's how her dog found the dead body. I hope she didn't have to repair her own car but she got a story to investigate and write about.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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It was an almost accident..Bruiser's careless driving ran her off the road, but she's okay. She was going to walk Brandi when the pup discovered the wreck and the bodies. And I guarantee she will be hot on the trail of the story!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Yay! It's Garth! And now Emmy and Hank will get to meet and work with Garth. But I wonder who this Crissy is. Garth is attracted to reporter ladies. I wonder if something will happen between the two. It's no coincidence that she would get a call through to Garth.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Yay! It's Garth! And now Emmy and Hank will get to meet and work with Garth. But I wonder who this Crissy is. Garth is attracted to reporter ladies. I wonder if something will happen between the two. It's no coincidence that she would get a call through to Garth.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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LOL... I can't believe what an impression Garth has made on the readers. The cowboy wins every time! I'm not positive how Chrissy will playout but I needed a way to connect Garth to the scene, but flirtations are so much fun (and it's the season for good spirits and cheer). Thanks, Helen, Hope you are doing okay.....
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very well-written with lots of information to make the reader care for Crissy. The discovery of the car is emotion-packed with memories of the two petty criminals and their hideous death. One misspelling: The car jerked and (shuddered.)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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This is very well-written with lots of information to make the reader care for Crissy. The discovery of the car is emotion-packed with memories of the two petty criminals and their hideous death. One misspelling: The car jerked and (shuddered.)
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Nice catch, Carol. Appreciate the help whenever I can get it. I hope Chrissy made the transition into the story smooth. It was the only way I knew to connect the FBI to the crime. I so so appreciate your support and the shiny stars.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! The part about Chrissy is a breather from all the intensity of the previous chapters. Now that Garth is awake, I hope the murder of Paddy and Mason will be solved. Many twists in this interesting plot. Blessings.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Great chapter! The part about Chrissy is a breather from all the intensity of the previous chapters. Now that Garth is awake, I hope the murder of Paddy and Mason will be solved. Many twists in this interesting plot. Blessings.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Yeah, I try to insert moments for the reader to catch their breath and maybe smile too. Thanks for the great review and for your kindness.
Hugs, Carol
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Yes, we need a breather from the book, but also from the holiday whirl! Lol.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Reading about Crissy, was like a welcomed intermission from the intensity of the previous chapter. I loved the way you introduced Crissy and her co-pilot. Your description of Crissy's actions gives the reader the feeling that they know her. Now that Garth Woodman is involved, I'm sure the next chapter will be action packed. See you then.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Reading about Crissy, was like a welcomed intermission from the intensity of the previous chapter. I loved the way you introduced Crissy and her co-pilot. Your description of Crissy's actions gives the reader the feeling that they know her. Now that Garth Woodman is involved, I'm sure the next chapter will be action packed. See you then.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Lorraine. I hope the insertion of Crissy went smoothly so I could introduce our FBI agent into the crime. So many have been asking for his return.. they love the cowboy. LOL Thanks again!!!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
We have a change of scene and the ladies and a Brandi come into focus and they discover the bullet riddled car with bodies, and.Crissy gets hold of Garth, befuddled by sleep on the phone, and tells him of her discovery, he swings into action. Well done Carol, good scribing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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We have a change of scene and the ladies and a Brandi come into focus and they discover the bullet riddled car with bodies, and.Crissy gets hold of Garth, befuddled by sleep on the phone, and tells him of her discovery, he swings into action. Well done Carol, good scribing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I have to please the "soft side" of some of the readers who have asked for our Cowboy to reappear so I hope this went well in the transition.
Thanks for the review and support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
A great chapter, Carol! I'm so happy I'm back in the swing of this saga. A lot is happening, and I'm super intrigued. The bullet-riddled car and the blood. I can't wait to find out where this is going. I loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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A great chapter, Carol! I'm so happy I'm back in the swing of this saga. A lot is happening, and I'm super intrigued. The bullet-riddled car and the blood. I can't wait to find out where this is going. I loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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I'm very happy that you decided to follow along John. There's so much more waiting in the wings. This writer tends to like surprises around every corner... silly me!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
And this is exactly why I'm here waiting impatiently for you to post every chapter! This is perfectly written, and I took a shine to those two knuckleheads, Mason and Paddy. It's making me very happy that Garth will now be on the case! Seriously...anybody driving at dawn, listening to Blake, with a Golden Retriever at her side instantly becomes my favorite
ace reporter! Come on Garth! Up! Let's get a move on!
(You're amazing)
I am out of six stars...I know, on Tuesday. "Virtuals" only-- but I mean them!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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And this is exactly why I'm here waiting impatiently for you to post every chapter! This is perfectly written, and I took a shine to those two knuckleheads, Mason and Paddy. It's making me very happy that Garth will now be on the case! Seriously...anybody driving at dawn, listening to Blake, with a Golden Retriever at her side instantly becomes my favorite
ace reporter! Come on Garth! Up! Let's get a move on!
(You're amazing)
I am out of six stars...I know, on Tuesday. "Virtuals" only-- but I mean them!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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You gave me stars to fill the entire universe. I just hope the story was worth it. I love Crissy too! Thank you again.
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She's spunky! Love that! (IS she loosely written on YOU?)
SMIRKy smile.....