When the One you Love is Gone
Blank Verse43 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very creative. The font and background and picture match perfectly. A lot of people miss on the small details, but you nailed it.
Great work! Keep it up poet!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Very creative. The font and background and picture match perfectly. A lot of people miss on the small details, but you nailed it.
Great work! Keep it up poet!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Hello Douglas, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts which mean a lot to me. I'm glad that you liked the presentation, and I'll keep trying to perfect my writing. Once again, thank you. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, each day is a gift that needs to be treasured. Because tomorrow you could find yourself alone. Each one of us has a time limit. And we never know what day or hour God will call us home. I do relate. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Yes, each day is a gift that needs to be treasured. Because tomorrow you could find yourself alone. Each one of us has a time limit. And we never know what day or hour God will call us home. I do relate. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi Carolyn, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts which mean a lot to me. I truly appreciate the time spent and your continued support. Margaret ~ LB
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You are welcome.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very good poem. It flowed quite well. I expected to see more about lost loved ones, though. I lost my husband three years ago come Wednesday. I still miss him so much! I will just be sitting watching television or writing, and I will realize how much I miss him and just start crying.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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This was a very good poem. It flowed quite well. I expected to see more about lost loved ones, though. I lost my husband three years ago come Wednesday. I still miss him so much! I will just be sitting watching television or writing, and I will realize how much I miss him and just start crying.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hello Monica, thank you for your heartfelt review and for sharing your personal loss. The loss of a spouse is a pain beyond compare. Tomorrow is your husband's 3 year anniversary date. I will pray for both of you, Sincerely, LateBloomer
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Thank you! I miss him so much!
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My condolences. It is now Sept. 28th.
Sincerely, LateBloomer
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I found these
words to be sad when you lose someone you love. Yet as the author states, to focus on a new day realizes life is a Gift. Thank you for the author's notes - they are a reminder for me to live in the moment. The artwork is awesome and goes well with this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I found these
words to be sad when you lose someone you love. Yet as the author states, to focus on a new day realizes life is a Gift. Thank you for the author's notes - they are a reminder for me to live in the moment. The artwork is awesome and goes well with this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hello harmony13, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. Yes, each day is a gift, and we need to embrace each moment. Once again, thank you. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I have to say, as I read this beautifully written poem, I thought of my sister, Rose. Her husband passed away last month. I know in time, she will "give thanks for today."
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I have to say, as I read this beautifully written poem, I thought of my sister, Rose. Her husband passed away last month. I know in time, she will "give thanks for today."
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hi Mary, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts, especially about your sister Rose. In time, she will give thanks as will my cousin's widow. Her husband died about two months ago. I wrote this poem for her, but I will not share it with her for a while. I don't think that she is ready. Once again, thank you for your review. LateBloomer
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, Latebloomer, but when I see the fourteen lines that represent a sonnet, I cry out for rhyme. This topic is a good one, and I think a try at rhyming might give you a great poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Nicely done, Latebloomer, but when I see the fourteen lines that represent a sonnet, I cry out for rhyme. This topic is a good one, and I think a try at rhyming might give you a great poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Paul, for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I wrote this poem in Blank Verse. The Blank Verse Sonnet is simply a sonnet written in Blank Verse. It has all of the features of the sonnet without rhyme. I have a saying, "Life doesn't always rhyme so why should poetry." Once again, thank you for your review. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
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I think you should write a poem about your quote: "Life doesn't always rhyme so why should poetry."
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Lol. A terrific thought. I'll have to think about that one, and the million dollar question, "Will the poem rhyme or not?" Lol. Thanks for making me laugh and smile. LateBloomer
p.s. I have many quotes and sayings.
I have a friend who wants me to put them in a little book. Big-teeth smile.
Comment from Aussie
Amen, Yes, things always look better in the daylight. I enjoyed your poem. I am alone with faithful dog. I lost my partner and I do not grieve because God has the last say. We are in End of Days. Blessings, Kay.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Amen, Yes, things always look better in the daylight. I enjoyed your poem. I am alone with faithful dog. I lost my partner and I do not grieve because God has the last say. We are in End of Days. Blessings, Kay.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hello Kay, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts which mean a lot to me, especially "God has the last say."
I truly appreciate the time spent,
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautiful, LB. I'm positive it helped with the grieving that a family member was going through. When presented correctly, the power of the written word is meaningful and healing. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This is beautiful, LB. I'm positive it helped with the grieving that a family member was going through. When presented correctly, the power of the written word is meaningful and healing. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hi John, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I haven't shared the poem with my cousin's wife yet.
His death is too recent. I'll hold on to it for a little while and then
forward it to her. Once again, thank you. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. No matter how long your loved one has been gone, there are many moments when you miss them. I miss my husband most this time of year, as we used to go for a lot of drives to see the autumn colour. It's no fun alone.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. No matter how long your loved one has been gone, there are many moments when you miss them. I miss my husband most this time of year, as we used to go for a lot of drives to see the autumn colour. It's no fun alone.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hi Anne, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts and experiences. I truly appreciate the time spent.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
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You are welcome, Margaret.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated poem. The text size is great. The message is clearly given. The speaker is lonely and especially in the nighttime hours. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully stated poem. The text size is great. The message is clearly given. The speaker is lonely and especially in the nighttime hours. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Hi Sandra, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts which mean a lot to me. I truly appreciate the time spent.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
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You are most welcome.
