Dolls Don't Cry
The penalty for snitching in this part of the world is death12 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Wow, this is quite a story. It is a bit long, but it doesn't matter, as I was hooked on the first paragraph. And the ending was stupendous. I repeat it, Wow! I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. This is a terrific entry.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Wow, this is quite a story. It is a bit long, but it doesn't matter, as I was hooked on the first paragraph. And the ending was stupendous. I repeat it, Wow! I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. This is a terrific entry.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Awww thank you so much!! I love this feedback (and, yes, I agree that it is a bit long.....). Thank you for taking the time to read and respond!!
Comment from JanPerry
Hi there horror addict. I don't enjoy double spacing, it makes the eyes work too hard. Horror poetry is popular at Fanstory. Dean Kuch was the top horror writer here before he passed away. Your writing is excellent with many strong adjectives, horror references, and some onomatopoeia.
Although the story seems to go on forever, it is entertaining and descriptive.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Hi there horror addict. I don't enjoy double spacing, it makes the eyes work too hard. Horror poetry is popular at Fanstory. Dean Kuch was the top horror writer here before he passed away. Your writing is excellent with many strong adjectives, horror references, and some onomatopoeia.
Although the story seems to go on forever, it is entertaining and descriptive.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Oh wow....thank you for your feedback! I have actually just finished writing a book of horror poetry, and I had no idea that it was popular on this site. I will submit some horror poetry in the future! I really appreciate this info, and I am grateful for your review. Thanks, again!!