The Return
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Comment from dmt1967
I love the end hook. It was a nice chapter but the end hook made me sit up and take notice. Very well use of the hook. Thank you for sharing and have a great week.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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I love the end hook. It was a nice chapter but the end hook made me sit up and take notice. Very well use of the hook. Thank you for sharing and have a great week.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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I love it when I can end on a hook, sometimes it's not possible. Thank you so much, Jackie, for this lovely review and the golden star! I really appreciate them both. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Iza Deleanu
And the dilemma still goes on, who is the real culprit, and what's the motive? I guess we will find it in the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter,
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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And the dilemma still goes on, who is the real culprit, and what's the motive? I guess we will find it in the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter,
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for reading this chapter, Iza, and the lovely comments. I do appreciate them a lot. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Cindy Warren
What might be sticking out the back? Could it be what Meg has been looking for? I wonder if Miles' mother could be another suspect. Could it be that Miles and Meg are related and that's why his parents are so against their wedding?
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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What might be sticking out the back? Could it be what Meg has been looking for? I wonder if Miles' mother could be another suspect. Could it be that Miles and Meg are related and that's why his parents are so against their wedding?
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Aha! Sorry, Bessie hasn't told me yet!! Lol. Thank you so much for another lovely review, Cindy. You always make me smile when you try to work out what's happening. That's so nice. Have a lovely week, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from blondie560
Hi Sandra! Another fantastic chapter, as was last week's. I never got around to reading anything last week. It's fun though to read two in a row, that way there is only one cliff hanger! This week's is very good. I feel sorry for the people that were aristocrats. It's like they have children as an obligation as if they are employees to keep the family business going instead of something to love and care for. How easily they cast them out if they dare disagree. I'll be greatly pleased to see them all get what's coming to them.
I hope you are doing well and have a lovely week! Hugs to you my friend! :) Sally
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Hi Sandra! Another fantastic chapter, as was last week's. I never got around to reading anything last week. It's fun though to read two in a row, that way there is only one cliff hanger! This week's is very good. I feel sorry for the people that were aristocrats. It's like they have children as an obligation as if they are employees to keep the family business going instead of something to love and care for. How easily they cast them out if they dare disagree. I'll be greatly pleased to see them all get what's coming to them.
I hope you are doing well and have a lovely week! Hugs to you my friend! :) Sally
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2022
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Aw thank you, Sally! I'm so glad you read last weeks as well, I enjoy doing that when I've missed someone's chapter. It is so encouraging to know you'd read two on the trot. And the golden star! That is a beautiful bonus! Thank you, dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from estory
The intrigue is getting thicker by the chapter in this tale. There's all kinds of suspicions from all kinds of characters, Lord Crawley, Gwendolynn, cheif among them. And then there's all the emotion between Miles and his father. he is obviously breaking out from underneath them to pursue his own life. the ending was really suspenseful. What has Meg found here? estory
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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The intrigue is getting thicker by the chapter in this tale. There's all kinds of suspicions from all kinds of characters, Lord Crawley, Gwendolynn, cheif among them. And then there's all the emotion between Miles and his father. he is obviously breaking out from underneath them to pursue his own life. the ending was really suspenseful. What has Meg found here? estory
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Estory. We're getting closer to the big reveal. I'm really pleased you have enjoyed my story so far, and thankful for your continued support. Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ah, What a great chapter! So many possible people that would like Meg out of the way. My head is whirling! The saga deepens with Miles's mother and father, his mother acting the part of being ill. I suspect something is amiss there, but your twists and turns only keep me guessing. Not fair! :) I Loved it, Sandra!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Ah, What a great chapter! So many possible people that would like Meg out of the way. My head is whirling! The saga deepens with Miles's mother and father, his mother acting the part of being ill. I suspect something is amiss there, but your twists and turns only keep me guessing. Not fair! :) I Loved it, Sandra!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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You always Make me smile, John, thank you so much for this lovely review. I think the twists and surprises coming up will really be unexpected. (I hope!) Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from tfawcus
Things are really hotting up in this chapter. It feels as though we've rounded the last corner and are entering the home straight.
I loved your description of Margot in this: "Margot was pacing up and down the sitting room; skirts swishing, hands on hips, and her green eyes blazing".
Great writing!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Things are really hotting up in this chapter. It feels as though we've rounded the last corner and are entering the home straight.
I loved your description of Margot in this: "Margot was pacing up and down the sitting room; skirts swishing, hands on hips, and her green eyes blazing".
Great writing!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Yes, we're half way round the corner, lots of twists and surprises coming up. I didn't even know about them until Bessie popped in to tell me!!! Lol.
Thank you so much for the lovely review, and for picking up on Margot's description. I could just see her in my mind acting like that. A big thank you for the golden star, my friend, I really appreciated it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gripping episode--the plot thickens. As always, tantalizing ending.
Margot wracked=>(pref.) RACKED her brain
https://grammarist.com/usage/rack-wrack
To wrack one's brain would be to wreck it. This might sort of make sense in some figurative uses, but rack is the standard spelling where the phrase means to think very hard. Wrack [one's] brain is so common, though, that we have no choice but to consider it an accepted variant (some dictionaries agree with this).
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Gripping episode--the plot thickens. As always, tantalizing ending.
Margot wracked=>(pref.) RACKED her brain
https://grammarist.com/usage/rack-wrack
To wrack one's brain would be to wreck it. This might sort of make sense in some figurative uses, but rack is the standard spelling where the phrase means to think very hard. Wrack [one's] brain is so common, though, that we have no choice but to consider it an accepted variant (some dictionaries agree with this).
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Liz! I've made that mistake before, but didn't learn by it. I will this time. I'm sooo glad I remembered to change it to let you review. My mind is really losing its sponginess! I think the holes in it are getting larger!! Thanks, my friend, for still coming to read my chapters and the great reviews you give me. I really appreciate you a lot. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
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No need to fret--it's not about the $--most fans don't allow review--I just let them know via email that I read it--another reason to stay in touch! Cheers.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This chapter read well, Sandra. Your words were descriptive
with great details. I like the way it started with Margot fuming
mad. Gwendolyn acted like her insolent self. However, Margot
and Bessie are on to her. She'll not escape their actions. Too
bad didn't stand up to his father nine years ago. You wrote
that section well. The maid who was injured had some
ulterior motive. Was she paid off to be a spy? I believe she
knew of the item hidden with the picture and was trying
to get it--not dusting the picture. I like the way you used
crikey and gobsmacked to remind readers Margot and
Bessie started this case in real time, though they traveled
back a hundred years.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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This chapter read well, Sandra. Your words were descriptive
with great details. I like the way it started with Margot fuming
mad. Gwendolyn acted like her insolent self. However, Margot
and Bessie are on to her. She'll not escape their actions. Too
bad didn't stand up to his father nine years ago. You wrote
that section well. The maid who was injured had some
ulterior motive. Was she paid off to be a spy? I believe she
knew of the item hidden with the picture and was trying
to get it--not dusting the picture. I like the way you used
crikey and gobsmacked to remind readers Margot and
Bessie started this case in real time, though they traveled
back a hundred years.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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You were the only one to pick up on the modern day words used in this chapter. Thank you! I like to add things like that to remind people.
Miles is furious that his mother has been deceiving him all these years, but he doesn't know why. That's the hard thing to accept. You don't need your parents to lie to you.
Thank you so very much for another lovely, thorough review, my dear friend, and the golden star. You know how much I appreciate you. Love and hug, Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, you've done it again as usually, let me waiting until next week to find out what's sticking out of the picture. LOL. Even knowing that's what good writers do, doesn't make waiting any easier. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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Well, you've done it again as usually, let me waiting until next week to find out what's sticking out of the picture. LOL. Even knowing that's what good writers do, doesn't make waiting any easier. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
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I'm a pain in the butt, aren't I? Lol. Thank you so much, Ric, for another lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this chapter. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx