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The Return

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Erotic Turmoil

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Comment from Beck Fenton
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I will have to go back and read the beginning of the novel, but you have such a good hand in letting me jump right into the lives of your characters! That, Sandra, is truly a gift!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Aw, thank you again, Beck, for another really lovely review. I'm so pleased you like it enough to go back. It will explain what is happening to Margot and Meg. It's lovely to have you back, did I already tell you that?? Lol. It's true, any way. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, Margot will soon be able to compare a real man to a ghost, but I'm sure it won't be must different than how most people imagine the differences of one person to another real or imaginable. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Yes, there is a lot of difference, and Margot is about to find out just how much!! Thank you, Ric, for another lovely review. You always put a smile on my face. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from tfawcus
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This is a marvellous portrayal of Meg's conflicting emotions as she inhabits the space between two eras. I can't wait to see how things turn out!
Just one query: Should They fit her finger perfectly. be They fitted her finger perfectly?

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much, Tony. I've made that correction. I must still have been foggy brained when I wrote it!! Lol. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Margot / Meg is in for a lot of soul searching before this is over. Thank you, also, for the golden star, my friend, I really appreciate that. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Sanku
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Margot and meg are totally en meshed and it is up to you to unravel the knots. And I am sure you will.
It is a very romantic episode and I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much for your lovely review, Sanku, I'm glad you are a romantic. Yes, Margot is in trouble with her emotions, she will find it harder as the story goes on. Have a lovely day, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh no! It seems that Margot has really fallen for Miles. I wonder if all her emotions are going to make it hard for her to accomplish her mission to uncover the mystery of Meg's death. Hope Bessie will know how to help Margot rein in her emotions!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    We will see what happens as the story goes on, but Margot won't have it easy now she's realised she actually loves Miles and is not just infatuated with him. Thank you so much, Helen, I'm glad you're still enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my frend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jay Squires
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He's going to know for sure that I'm not Meg. I am not ready for this! [I'm loving this exquisite choreography, but I'm troubled by the continually arising question: Where is Meg? Miles thinks the rings he put on Megan's finger are really on Meg's. The next time he sees Meg, she will not be wearing the rings. I can love the marvelous drama you are allowing to unfold before me, but my mind is still being niggled by that problem. I hope you can explain it to me.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Hi Jay, thank you so much for this lovely review, and for that golden nugget!! I'm glad you are still enjoying the story.

    Margot and Meg's merging, let me see if I can explain it a bit better. In Chapter 14 you had the scene where Margot's body and mind merged with Megs. It was like Margot's body was being pulled to pieces and melding with Meg's body. So, they are both now in one body, but Meg's mind is now in stasis, a state where her mind is lulled into inactivity while Margot and Bessie work to find out who is planning her murder. When all the answers are found, and Margot has stopped Meg's murder, Meg will be brought out of stasis and have her body back. The rings are on the fingers of the one physical body, and will remain when Meg 'wakes up' and Margot returns to herself in her own time. I hope that helps, I was giggling while trying to explain it, wondering where the hell I got this plot from!!
    Have a lovely week, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by Jay Squires on 18-Apr-2022
    You couldn't have given me a better (and probably unneeded) explanation, Sandra. But I'm now fully aboard and on track for the remainder of the adventure. Huzzah!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Oh, that is brilliant. It's nice to know I managed to explain it okay. Thanks, Jay, you are such a great friend. xxxx
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Things are getting heated, my friend. She'll have to come up with something before he gets back.
I can feel Margot falling in love with him and you've made me feel her anguish and the nervous anticipation of his return. Great chapter, Sandra! I'm so happy to hear you're well and writing.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you, John. Yes, I'm much better now, and back with a vengeance!

    Thank you so much, John for another lovely review, I do appreciate your reading and your comments. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful continuation chapter, Sandra. I am so happy that Miles proposed to Meg/Margot, it certainly was a fantastic event. Margot got smart and questioned Miles about keeping the rings. Of course, he reassured her. He did promise to return later that day. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessings, hugs n smiles

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you, dear friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this part, I hope you'll like the next one!! Lol. Have a lovely week, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by aryr on 18-Apr-2022
    You are so welcome, Sandra. I am sure I will next chapter. You as well have a lovely week. Warm hugs!
Comment from royowen
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Poor old Margot, I don't think she knows that her and Meg are forever enmeshed, she is Meg, and Meg is she. But you ate a romantic, I'm sure you're many things, but certainly a Romantic, how are they going to fix this. It seems there are so many wicked people in this world, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much, Roy, for your lovely review. Yes, I am a romantic, so you know already that things will work out well. :)) I hope you had a lovely Easter, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
reply by royowen on 18-Apr-2022
    We did Sandra, hope you did too
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Astounding--never have I read of a dual-identity situation such as this. Inhabiting the body of her spiritual double to prevent her murder. The suspense is excruciating. Touching love scene.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
    Thanks so much, Liz. I remembered to allow standard members to read this time. I'm over the moon that you enjoyed it. Thanks my friend. Hope your Easter was a good one. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 17-Apr-2022
    Thanks. Every penny helps fund repromotions.