Hope Emerges Through the Rain
Blessing...43 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
There are so many natural and beautiful wonders in the sky and on earth. The picture you included with your poem is phenomenal, and the words in your Lune creatively the meaning...divine gifts given. Best wishes in the contest.
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There are so many natural and beautiful wonders in the sky and on earth. The picture you included with your poem is phenomenal, and the words in your Lune creatively the meaning...divine gifts given. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from jaded831
Your lune describes a unique rainstorm, combined with sun. You truly painted s picture with you short syllable count. The picture compliments your words. Together they make a great presentation.
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Your lune describes a unique rainstorm, combined with sun. You truly painted s picture with you short syllable count. The picture compliments your words. Together they make a great presentation.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Hope Emerges Through the Rain, provides a lesson in faith which provides that behind every dark cloud is the promise of God's love.
Note: The poem's name, LUNE, is based on the C shape, representing a crescent moon. To achieve that you will need to left-justify the text.
Happy day.
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This lune poem, Hope Emerges Through the Rain, provides a lesson in faith which provides that behind every dark cloud is the promise of God's love.
Note: The poem's name, LUNE, is based on the C shape, representing a crescent moon. To achieve that you will need to left-justify the text.
Happy day.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Good entry for the Write a Lune writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from nomi338
Glorious rainfall, God's gift to men and the earth. Without rain life dies. A careful search of history shows that without rainfall, men have been forced to wander in search of a place that still has water. Rain makers, people who pray for rain, people who salt the clouds in hope that they can cause rain to fall. All are in high demand in the face of lack of water. So, thank God for rain, it is essential to life.
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Glorious rainfall, God's gift to men and the earth. Without rain life dies. A careful search of history shows that without rainfall, men have been forced to wander in search of a place that still has water. Rain makers, people who pray for rain, people who salt the clouds in hope that they can cause rain to fall. All are in high demand in the face of lack of water. So, thank God for rain, it is essential to life.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Janetsue
Hope is a great healer of dark thoughts and moods. I like the analogy posted here presented with an eye-catching picture. Maintaining hope is a blessing that spreads out to touch those around us. Sincere best wishes in the contest!
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Hope is a great healer of dark thoughts and moods. I like the analogy posted here presented with an eye-catching picture. Maintaining hope is a blessing that spreads out to touch those around us. Sincere best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A stunning image, and so unusual. I can see why you were inspired to write your well chosen and thoughtful words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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A stunning image, and so unusual. I can see why you were inspired to write your well chosen and thoughtful words. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We certainly do need the rain although I prefer the balmy sun and as long as the rain knows when to share the skies, I am happy, a fun lune, love Dolly x
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We certainly do need the rain although I prefer the balmy sun and as long as the rain knows when to share the skies, I am happy, a fun lune, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good religious poem that water and sun bring life to all on Earth and that they are gifts to be grateful for.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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This is a good religious poem that water and sun bring life to all on Earth and that they are gifts to be grateful for.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
Comment from royowen
Indeed, God is quite definitely a gift giver, He spreads His love by means of abundant giving, and not only that, of giving His Son is the most wonderful gift of all, beautifully written my friend, an outstanding Lune, good luck, blessings Roy
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Indeed, God is quite definitely a gift giver, He spreads His love by means of abundant giving, and not only that, of giving His Son is the most wonderful gift of all, beautifully written my friend, an outstanding Lune, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2022
