Revenge
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh my word! Sam is in big trouble now, and no one knows where Vito has taken her. He thinks Jaz is safely locked in a room with Charles ... where is Charles?? Is he really like Vito? Somehow I don't think so. Now we have to find Sam, and fast. What a great chapter this one is, Carol. Well done, my clever friend. Next, please!! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Oh my word! Sam is in big trouble now, and no one knows where Vito has taken her. He thinks Jaz is safely locked in a room with Charles ... where is Charles?? Is he really like Vito? Somehow I don't think so. Now we have to find Sam, and fast. What a great chapter this one is, Carol. Well done, my clever friend. Next, please!! Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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We are almost to the end and actually I am looking forward to it. I loved writing but life just keeps on slugging. I hate not being able to keep up with everything. but I smile every time I see your picture...it gives me a boost.
Hugs and love, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This is getting any closer to allowing us to breath easy. You characters are anywhere close to safe as far as I can tell. I was surprised that Charles doesn't seem to be around. I'm anxiously awaiting the nest chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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This is getting any closer to allowing us to breath easy. You characters are anywhere close to safe as far as I can tell. I was surprised that Charles doesn't seem to be around. I'm anxiously awaiting the nest chapter.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
So I guess we know we can trust Max now, but Sam is in grave danger. It seems all the plans got changed. Such suspense! Another excellent chapter, Carol. You are on a roll.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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So I guess we know we can trust Max now, but Sam is in grave danger. It seems all the plans got changed. Such suspense! Another excellent chapter, Carol. You are on a roll.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
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No worries, Carol. I understand.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You did well by handling so many characters and putting them all in the right situation.
The tension is getting high and I worried about Samantha.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You did well by handling so many characters and putting them all in the right situation.
The tension is getting high and I worried about Samantha.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a great story. Your dialogue is what carries it forward in such a marvelous manner. I can't wait to find out where you are going with this novel. I didn't spot any errors.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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This is a great story. Your dialogue is what carries it forward in such a marvelous manner. I can't wait to find out where you are going with this novel. I didn't spot any errors.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
No way is this good. Everybody's in danger. It went bad, very bad. Good writing.
"have you lost your mind? (capital 'h' needed on 'have')
Garth answered his cell. "Talk to me. What's happening?" (comma needed after 'cell')
Don't blame yourself. None of us had any idea how warped Vito's mind was. He's a very sick man, and I believe he's convinced Charles to follow in his footsteps." (Missing beginning quotation marks."
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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No way is this good. Everybody's in danger. It went bad, very bad. Good writing.
"have you lost your mind? (capital 'h' needed on 'have')
Garth answered his cell. "Talk to me. What's happening?" (comma needed after 'cell')
Don't blame yourself. None of us had any idea how warped Vito's mind was. He's a very sick man, and I believe he's convinced Charles to follow in his footsteps." (Missing beginning quotation marks."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much. Forgive the cut and paste but I am so far behind with showing my appreciation to everyone. Please know it is sincere. This story went in a darker direction than I originally planned (maybe my life got caught up in it) but as we draw closer to the end, I am thrilled that you have continued to follow and enjoy it.
I hope you have the best of holidays. Hugs, Carol
