Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Revenge - Chap 29"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Hope you're have a great week so far and managing to get caught up. Which is sometimes nearly impossible with daily duties included with all the addons. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Ric
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Hope you're have a great week so far and managing to get caught up. Which is sometimes nearly impossible with daily duties included with all the addons. LOL. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Ric
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. This is the second chapter I have read of this story today. It just keeps getting better. You know it's good if I continue reading a mystery story. LOL I will watch for your next chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Excellent. This is the second chapter I have read of this story today. It just keeps getting better. You know it's good if I continue reading a mystery story. LOL I will watch for your next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Wow, Allie is very head-strung and sure doesn't listen to reason! Like Garth and the others, I fear for her safety and that of Jaz. She could blow the whole thing. I wonder what she plans to tell the media. This is a very interesting and thought provoking chapter, Carol. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Wow, Allie is very head-strung and sure doesn't listen to reason! Like Garth and the others, I fear for her safety and that of Jaz. She could blow the whole thing. I wonder what she plans to tell the media. This is a very interesting and thought provoking chapter, Carol. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
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You're welcome, Carol.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really liked this post, but I'm wondering if Allie's actions weren't a little over the top. I know she's upset and should be, but....
Your entire team could stake out the place out." (omit the second 'out')
She turned toward the team and smiled, "Please excuse me," (period needed after 'smiled')
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I really liked this post, but I'm wondering if Allie's actions weren't a little over the top. I know she's upset and should be, but....
Your entire team could stake out the place out." (omit the second 'out')
She turned toward the team and smiled, "Please excuse me," (period needed after 'smiled')
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Another great chapter! The plot thickens. I'm sure that Garth is really worried about Allie being the bait. She is a spunky gal. Hopefully, it will help them find Allie's sister. You are a very talented writer and I do enjoy everything that you write. Keep going strong!
Patty
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Another great chapter! The plot thickens. I'm sure that Garth is really worried about Allie being the bait. She is a spunky gal. Hopefully, it will help them find Allie's sister. You are a very talented writer and I do enjoy everything that you write. Keep going strong!
Patty
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a quick turn of the event! I read this chapter quickly and it's well written and kept my interests. You characterization is good. Now I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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What a quick turn of the event! I read this chapter quickly and it's well written and kept my interests. You characterization is good. Now I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It held my interest from beginning to end. The story is moving for ward well and as always I like the dialagus and characterisation. In this chapter Allie's character comes out strong. Good going.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. It held my interest from beginning to end. The story is moving for ward well and as always I like the dialagus and characterisation. In this chapter Allie's character comes out strong. Good going.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
You have really pumped the character of Allie up. She is a little spitfire and she seems dangerous. She seems to feel it should be her way or the highway, and maybe her way will win out, but she is a match for Garth. He will never be able to control her personality. Good chapter.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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You have really pumped the character of Allie up. She is a little spitfire and she seems dangerous. She seems to feel it should be her way or the highway, and maybe her way will win out, but she is a match for Garth. He will never be able to control her personality. Good chapter.
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from AnnieDawn
An excellent read for this chapter and I have read more of your chapters and enjoyed them. Good take on the story which carries the characters along well. Excellent punctuation too. The only thing I have to offer is a suggestion. Keep up the good work.
"Francine's? That's the restaurant we met Selene and Tommy, isn't it?"(feels like a 'where' would fit nicely after the word restaurant)
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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An excellent read for this chapter and I have read more of your chapters and enjoyed them. Good take on the story which carries the characters along well. Excellent punctuation too. The only thing I have to offer is a suggestion. Keep up the good work.
"Francine's? That's the restaurant we met Selene and Tommy, isn't it?"(feels like a 'where' would fit nicely after the word restaurant)
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
