Revenge
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Comment from royowen
It's obviously a real knife, and the poor girl will be implicated in the murder, I'll bet. However Lenny isn't pleases with James, and in his muttering gas promised pay back, so it's getting to the interesting stage, everyone wants to get James. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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It's obviously a real knife, and the poor girl will be implicated in the murder, I'll bet. However Lenny isn't pleases with James, and in his muttering gas promised pay back, so it's getting to the interesting stage, everyone wants to get James. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : As he lif(c)ted 2: You've got (t)his.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from BethShelby
I hope TIffany isn't about to kill Drake Lexington but unless something stops it, I think that is exactly what is planned. Then they will have what appears to be Jaz killing her lover, Drake on film. This is the way they plan to put Jaz in prison as part of the plot to get at Allie.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope TIffany isn't about to kill Drake Lexington but unless something stops it, I think that is exactly what is planned. Then they will have what appears to be Jaz killing her lover, Drake on film. This is the way they plan to put Jaz in prison as part of the plot to get at Allie.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another great chapter, Carol. I admit I had to re-read the list of characters to get it all straight in my mind, then it made more sense when I read it the second time. So far we haven't seen the real Jaz, but I have a feeling she's going to appear soon. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This is another great chapter, Carol. I admit I had to re-read the list of characters to get it all straight in my mind, then it made more sense when I read it the second time. So far we haven't seen the real Jaz, but I have a feeling she's going to appear soon. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Trouble in paradise and the line to betrayal its so thine. "
"Come in." The stunt double was relaxing on the lounge. He nodded and grinned when he saw his visitor. "For an ex-con, you got a real nice place, Vito."
"I suggest you keep your thoughts to yourself, Lenny. I got you out of jail, and I can send you back just as quick. Welcher does what I want."
"Cool your jets, pal. I was just commenting on how cozy you had it."
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Trouble in paradise and the line to betrayal its so thine. "
"Come in." The stunt double was relaxing on the lounge. He nodded and grinned when he saw his visitor. "For an ex-con, you got a real nice place, Vito."
"I suggest you keep your thoughts to yourself, Lenny. I got you out of jail, and I can send you back just as quick. Welcher does what I want."
"Cool your jets, pal. I was just commenting on how cozy you had it."
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your time, review and thoughts. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Mystery & Crime Fiction, a Chapter in the book Revenge, Chapter 23 Revenge, speaks about James's idea of revenge blossoms; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This Mystery & Crime Fiction, a Chapter in the book Revenge, Chapter 23 Revenge, speaks about James's idea of revenge blossoms; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I am 172 reviews behind, and I feel terrible about it. I find myself feeling safer dealing with my murderous characters than dealing with my family. I hope everyone understands that I appreciate them very much, but I simply am struggling to keep my head above water. Each person deserves a big thank you for their time and effort... I hope my thanks and hugs will suffice for now.
(((Hugs))) Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Tiffany is in for one hell of a shock. That poor girl, those men are pure evil. Now it will look as if Jaz has commited a murder, before they get rid of this girl. How many girls have got to die for Vito to get his revenge? It's got to go wrong some time. Another sit on the edge of your seat chapter, Carol, well done!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Tiffany is in for one hell of a shock. That poor girl, those men are pure evil. Now it will look as if Jaz has commited a murder, before they get rid of this girl. How many girls have got to die for Vito to get his revenge? It's got to go wrong some time. Another sit on the edge of your seat chapter, Carol, well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. It means so much to me. Sorry for the cut and paste. If I can ever get my head on straight it will be a miracle. Hugbs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Diabolical! Do they want to kill the real actor so that he can't rat them out when they kill Tiffany. Do they need her prints to explain the murder and are they going to kill her regardless?
The [guys=>GUY IS] knocked out in the room next door.
Lenny cursed as he [drugged=>dragged] himself to a standing position.
Lenny stood there, wondering if Vito's right-hand man had heard [me=>HIM].
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Diabolical! Do they want to kill the real actor so that he can't rat them out when they kill Tiffany. Do they need her prints to explain the murder and are they going to kill her regardless?
The [guys=>GUY IS] knocked out in the room next door.
Lenny cursed as he [drugged=>dragged] himself to a standing position.
Lenny stood there, wondering if Vito's right-hand man had heard [me=>HIM].
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
It looks like they are shooting a movie and Charlie wanted Tiffany to really kill Vito using a knife. I'm not sure why. I thought Charlie was Vito's friend and sidekick. Why does Drake Lexington needs a double? I'm not sure how he could see Jaz who is missing?
Well done otherwise.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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It looks like they are shooting a movie and Charlie wanted Tiffany to really kill Vito using a knife. I'm not sure why. I thought Charlie was Vito's friend and sidekick. Why does Drake Lexington needs a double? I'm not sure how he could see Jaz who is missing?
Well done otherwise.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Okay, Lisa...I think you got lost. LOL Vito (James) is the director, and Charlie is his sidekick in this evil plan. Tiffany and Lenny are stunt doubles with makeup that makes them look exactly like the person they are pretending to be. Vito is planning revenge against Jaz and Allie by framing them with this movie. Neither stand-in actor is aware they will commit murder. I hope that helps.
Carol
