Revenge
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I have a funny feeling that Mary Beth might be murdered. You must like movies. I like the movie reference in this chapter.
Well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I have a funny feeling that Mary Beth might be murdered. You must like movies. I like the movie reference in this chapter.
Well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I don't get the opportunity to watch many movies these days but I am an avid reader and love to watch any and all detective stories. I think adding a piece of the past adds a little more interest to my stories...just a little nostalgia. You're probably very "hot" when it comes to Mary Beth's demise.
Thanks, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling! Doppelganger restaurants--I infer that poor Mary Beth was made up to look like Jaz and murdered to torment Allie. Masterfully written chapter!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Chilling! Doppelganger restaurants--I infer that poor Mary Beth was made up to look like Jaz and murdered to torment Allie. Masterfully written chapter!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Francine's Restaurant looking exactly like Francesco's is a little creepy. And finding the movie script about Annie and Sebastian is totally weird. Wondering how all this fits together with the last book. You do keep us hanging, waiting for more chapters. Glad you're finding time to write. Blessings.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Francine's Restaurant looking exactly like Francesco's is a little creepy. And finding the movie script about Annie and Sebastian is totally weird. Wondering how all this fits together with the last book. You do keep us hanging, waiting for more chapters. Glad you're finding time to write. Blessings.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Such a clever link back to the previous book. Yes, the plot is excellent, and we know that Moretti is behind it all but there's a lot more to come out yet. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Such a clever link back to the previous book. Yes, the plot is excellent, and we know that Moretti is behind it all but there's a lot more to come out yet. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I'm sorry that I disappointed you with this chapter or was the four an accident. Either way---I am thankful that you continue to read and follow the story. Hugs, Carol
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Oh no you didn't disappoint! It was an accident, and I will go straight back to it and fix it. My apologies - please forgive! Sending you a hug!!
Wendy
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Fixed. I need to be more careful. I love your work and this story promises to be just as exciting as your previous book!
Wendy
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Thanks, Wendy... I just posted the continuation of the interview at Francine's. I think you might find out more clues. I hope you enjoy it. Hugs, Carol
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You are too sweet for me to ever be mad at you. I figured it was an accident or I wouldn't have said anything. Sweet dreams tonight!
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Definitely accident. You had such a gracious way of pointing it out. Sending hugs, along with my regular prayers for you. Yes, heading to bed very soon.
Wendy
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Sweet dreams, my dear friend.
Comment from Mary Shifman
Great chapter. I am always so engrossed when I am reading that when it comes to an end, I'm surprised! You write so well and keep things moving so that every chapter advances the story. I'm ready for the next exciting chapter!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Great chapter. I am always so engrossed when I am reading that when it comes to an end, I'm surprised! You write so well and keep things moving so that every chapter advances the story. I'm ready for the next exciting chapter!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
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That's okay. I feel like I'm in free-fall right now.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh that Moretti is truly sinister. But how would he know about the Napa Valley story? Was that in the news at all? He certainly is baiting Garth with this script and the red wig. Seems like he's leading them right to where they kept the murdered girl...
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Oh that Moretti is truly sinister. But how would he know about the Napa Valley story? Was that in the news at all? He certainly is baiting Garth with this script and the red wig. Seems like he's leading them right to where they kept the murdered girl...
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
I keep wanting to back and read this from the beginning...but this one is super. I like the way you write. I write from a spacy place - ethereal, but yours is wonderfully real and worldly. Very fine work.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I keep wanting to back and read this from the beginning...but this one is super. I like the way you write. I write from a spacy place - ethereal, but yours is wonderfully real and worldly. Very fine work.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Terry Broxson
Very good. One of things I like about your writing is the details. Some small some large for example the truck blocking the restaurant, Sysco. Most people would not know that they are a food distributor...to restaurants. And the larger detail...Maureen O' Hara and John Wayne, sure people would know them, and it is the details, large and small that make it flow. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Very good. One of things I like about your writing is the details. Some small some large for example the truck blocking the restaurant, Sysco. Most people would not know that they are a food distributor...to restaurants. And the larger detail...Maureen O' Hara and John Wayne, sure people would know them, and it is the details, large and small that make it flow. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
How very interesting that your two stories are connecting with one another, you are quite the writer dear Carol. So Garth and tango are checking out the restaurant place and there is a girl, waiting for movie role, missing, how very interesting! Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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How very interesting that your two stories are connecting with one another, you are quite the writer dear Carol. So Garth and tango are checking out the restaurant place and there is a girl, waiting for movie role, missing, how very interesting! Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
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No need to apologise for being over worked Carol.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Nice story. There was a murder. Cops have a hard job. They actually have to take something out of nothing and try to understand what its all about. You did a good job. I like this story. Very interesting. Good luck
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Nice story. There was a murder. Cops have a hard job. They actually have to take something out of nothing and try to understand what its all about. You did a good job. I like this story. Very interesting. Good luck
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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I apologize that life has put me so far behind. I appreciate your thoughts and time.
Hugs, Carol
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I understand you I had a misable birthday and I hate where I am living and I am not happy butt I pray everything works out for you and me. You are so welcom,e.
