Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hello anon, very clever 5/7/5 both amusing and true to form. Great picture - this should do well in the contest. These forms are not easy as one would think - well done - good luck - regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Dorothy for your stellar review...

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is soooo adorable, I wish I had a six for it. I love cats, and your poem really appeased me. A precious picture of this precious animals, and the unique part is, when their tails are joined, they form a heart!

LOVED this one. It is a winner, in my eyes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021

I love cats too kiddo... I will take your virtual six...

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Awww, how sweet. Mine snuggle like that too. I never thought to arrange their tails in a heart for a picture. The light colored one looks just like my Max. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks so much Cindy... they have my heart...

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like how you became creative with your poem and the image fits perfectly. It's interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks so much for the stars Raul!

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem for the witty animal writing prompt. Your photo is adorable and compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest. Very Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks ever so Joanne

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Ain't Love Grand...
Sometimes Love Hurts

Excellent entry for the Witty, Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count. The connection between lines can be improved.

our tails join as one
that becomes a playful heart --
whoops, d@mn; now they're jammed

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

I agree... thanks for the help

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and this is a magical picture too, we are sometimes involved with someone who steals our heart and we suffer for it afterwards, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

ain't that just the livin' truth Dolly!

Comment from Livia Lynch

Excellent

Hehe, I like this little thing quite a lot. It flows well, and the ending is just everything. Good job, wittily put.

Hope you are having a wonderful day :)

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks so much for your very stellar review... much gratitude.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

What a cute cat picture that forms a heart. I think you have too many syllables for the third line: Aren't characters "@#" counted as syllables?

Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks so much

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this writing prompt entry. You described their love using only a few syllables. I'm wondering which came first the photo or the poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

thanks barbara... the photo... how could I not write about this little treasure.

reply by barbara.wilkey on 14-Oct-2021

so true