The Vision
Can you see it?24 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
How lovely, my friend! Wonderful rhyme and an exquisite presentation. I would have liked to see this as an entry for the Faith poetry contest. :) I think it would have done very well.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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How lovely, my friend! Wonderful rhyme and an exquisite presentation. I would have liked to see this as an entry for the Faith poetry contest. :) I think it would have done very well.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Dawn,
You are always so kind. Thank you so much for your review and very uplifting comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from amahra
Every line drips of scripture. Coincidence or you are in link with God. I hardly think coincidence. That much knowledge of God comes from an ear to His breath. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem. Great job!
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Every line drips of scripture. Coincidence or you are in link with God. I hardly think coincidence. That much knowledge of God comes from an ear to His breath. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem. Great job!
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Amahra,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Hello,
Your poem is exceptional. You speak of God's final victory; I also believe Revelation won't be so scary, but it will be a time of great comfort for his people.
A beautiful work.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, Cindy
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Hello,
Your poem is exceptional. You speak of God's final victory; I also believe Revelation won't be so scary, but it will be a time of great comfort for his people.
A beautiful work.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Hello My Dear Friend,
It is so great to see you. Thanks so much for this outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments.
I agree with you it will not be scary at all for believers. I am looking forward to that blessed day.
I pray you and your family are all doing well.
Hugs...Portia
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Portia,
It is so good to hear from you! I?ve missed you. I hope all of your family are well.
Blessings and keep inspiring others!
Cindy
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Cindy,
I missed you a lot. It is so good to see you. I pray you are doing well and staying safe.
How is your father, and how are you doing in your Cello lessons?
Hugs...Portia
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Hi, Portia. I missed you too! My dad is still living and is very grumpy at 95. Lol. My cello lessons are ok. There are turning points in music where one goes from acceptable to good to great. I?m still at the acceptable level. I took up flute again after studying it in college (lessons) and I am at the good level. My niece studies music and she is giving me internet lessons for a brush up.
Portia, it is so nice that we reconnected our friendship. I hope your husband and rest of your family stay safe and well.
Have a great spring and summer and please stay in touch.
Cindy
Comment from royowen
A supremely written pentametric psalm to the Lord God praising the King of glory, in perfect flow, meter and mono rhyme, the certainty of His return grows ever closer to conclusion, and like a thief in the night. You've written a classic with great, inventive and stylish language, well done Portia, wonderful writing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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A supremely written pentametric psalm to the Lord God praising the King of glory, in perfect flow, meter and mono rhyme, the certainty of His return grows ever closer to conclusion, and like a thief in the night. You've written a classic with great, inventive and stylish language, well done Portia, wonderful writing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Roy,
Thanks so much for your review; your words are very kind and uplifting. I praise and thank God for your kind and gentle spirit.
Your reviews are always encouraging, and there are times when it is needed.
Bless you, my friend...Portia
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Bless you
Comment from Wendy G
I sense a great longing and anticipation of His return, and I share it! Your poem gives praise and honour to the One who is in control. The writing is beautifully expressed and very thoughtfully written. Well done.
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I sense a great longing and anticipation of His return, and I share it! Your poem gives praise and honour to the One who is in control. The writing is beautifully expressed and very thoughtfully written. Well done.
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Wendy,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love the message of this poem, that Jesus' return is on the horizon, and the reminder that God is in control. I like the way each line rhymes in every stanza, and the repetition of the two lines at the end adds power to the poem. Nice artwork and coloring to accompany your words. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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I love the message of this poem, that Jesus' return is on the horizon, and the reminder that God is in control. I like the way each line rhymes in every stanza, and the repetition of the two lines at the end adds power to the poem. Nice artwork and coloring to accompany your words. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Carol,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You're welcome. Is that an army chaplain's hat you're wearing in your picture?
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No, it's just a regular hat I purchased when I was on vacation in Florida.
Hugs
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My brother-in-law is a retired Army Chaplain, and the hat is similar to his. It's very cute on you!
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Thanks, Carol, you are so kind.
Hugs...Portia
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Comment from l.raven
HI Portia, Amen my sweet friend....
there is no doubt in my heart that God
is in total control...
that He is right here with us...and He
holds us in His hands...that when He is ready...
He will show us the reason for all...but in the mean
time...He will never forsake us...and He will fight for what is right for us...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
so very well written...it is so good to see you...
love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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HI Portia, Amen my sweet friend....
there is no doubt in my heart that God
is in total control...
that He is right here with us...and He
holds us in His hands...that when He is ready...
He will show us the reason for all...but in the mean
time...He will never forsake us...and He will fight for what is right for us...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture...
so very well written...it is so good to see you...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Dearest Linda,
You really should see this smile on my face; It is a joy to hear from you, sweetie.
I pray you and your family are doing well.
Thanks so much for this outstanding review, six-star rating, very wise and true comments.
May God continue to keep you and your family in His loving care.
Sending love and hugs your way...Portia
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HI Portia, I am so sorry for my late reply...
so many things going on...sigh...
and you are always so welcome...much love...
and lots of hugs coming your way...God Bless...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Amen and amen! His coming is soon - all the signs are coming together and a confluence of angels is gathering. I am growing old but pray I get to see the day when sin and lies are done. You have written this with heart, I could feel it in you. One day this wheelchair will be gone and you and I can race heaven's fields...
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Amen and amen! His coming is soon - all the signs are coming together and a confluence of angels is gathering. I am growing old but pray I get to see the day when sin and lies are done. You have written this with heart, I could feel it in you. One day this wheelchair will be gone and you and I can race heaven's fields...
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Sherry,
I will be right there with you, my friend, running and having fun with our Lord.
Thanks so much for this very uplifting review; your words graced my soul.
Sending love and hugs your way...Portia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful and uplifting write for a Sunday and I enjoyed your enthusiasm here as your belief is honest and true, we all would like to see this vision too, love Dolly x
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A faithful and uplifting write for a Sunday and I enjoyed your enthusiasm here as your belief is honest and true, we all would like to see this vision too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Dolly,
You are always so kind.
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You sound deeply spiritual Portia x x x
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wonderful. I wish I have this vision. I wish the world have this vision. It will change everything we love and care about. This vision of God's realm graces my soul, belief is knowing He is in control. Yes God is in control. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Wonderful. I wish I have this vision. I wish the world have this vision. It will change everything we love and care about. This vision of God's realm graces my soul, belief is knowing He is in control. Yes God is in control. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Kitbok,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
