Creative Collections
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Unemployment Line"na-po-wri-mo contest
12 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You certainly went
through a lot after high school.
-I have one six star to give,
and I am honored to award it to you.
-You wrote an excellent poem
that came from your heart.
-It has a good flow, examples, and rhyme.
-You also tell a story, and
show how you were once treated.
-I can't imagine how that must
have impacted you, like you said,
"treated like a piece of dirt." That
shouldn't happen to anyone.
-But you persevered and got help;
so many don't, or can't afford it, etc.
-I like your image of "Standing proudly
on high-self-esteem's rock."
-A very good conclusion for
your poem and your journey.
-Best of luck in the contest
and na-po-wri-mo.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
  |
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You certainly went
through a lot after high school.
-I have one six star to give,
and I am honored to award it to you.
-You wrote an excellent poem
that came from your heart.
-It has a good flow, examples, and rhyme.
-You also tell a story, and
show how you were once treated.
-I can't imagine how that must
have impacted you, like you said,
"treated like a piece of dirt." That
shouldn't happen to anyone.
-But you persevered and got help;
so many don't, or can't afford it, etc.
-I like your image of "Standing proudly
on high-self-esteem's rock."
-A very good conclusion for
your poem and your journey.
-Best of luck in the contest
and na-po-wri-mo.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
-
Dear Pam, thanks so much for your comments and six stars!
-
You are very welcome and deserving.
Comment from Leann DS
I enjoyed reading your poem. I am very glad that you were able to overcome this hardship. Being unable to find employment is serious, and can contribute greatly to a persons self-esteem. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs and blessings.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
 |
I enjoyed reading your poem. I am very glad that you were able to overcome this hardship. Being unable to find employment is serious, and can contribute greatly to a persons self-esteem. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs and blessings.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
-
Dear Leann, thank you for your comments review and good luck wishes. Blessings to you too!