Ruminations from a Winding Career
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Almost Lost It All"Thoughts from almost 50 years
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand. I feel you need to break this up in paragraphs. It is called eye candy and is easier to read.
I got mono in college too.
As it turned out, I had twelve more credit hours than I needed when I completed summer school even though I had to take a correspondence course to complete the hours I needed in one area (needs a period)
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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I do understand. I feel you need to break this up in paragraphs. It is called eye candy and is easier to read.
I got mono in college too.
As it turned out, I had twelve more credit hours than I needed when I completed summer school even though I had to take a correspondence course to complete the hours I needed in one area (needs a period)
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much. I thought it was in paragraphs. I will go back and edit. Rdfrdmom2