My Big Green Friend
quatrains in rhyming couplets182 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem about the monster that was scared of his own bubble pop. i enjoyed reading this one. sawyer is adorable
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this cute poem about the monster that was scared of his own bubble pop. i enjoyed reading this one. sawyer is adorable
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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sweetwoodjax, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
Another delightful poem, Brooke. I do like how you take a creature who sometimes scare little kids, and you make it seem like a friend and Paul and can be fun instead of scary.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Another delightful poem, Brooke. I do like how you take a creature who sometimes scare little kids, and you make it seem like a friend and Paul and can be fun instead of scary.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
Green and purple, is it Barney? Yes, you're right, Sawyer's expression is priceless, worth a poem by Grandma... So entertaining. To think that the creature is human after all... :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Green and purple, is it Barney? Yes, you're right, Sawyer's expression is priceless, worth a poem by Grandma... So entertaining. To think that the creature is human after all... :)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Belinda, thank you so much. I definitely did not have Barney in mind. I'm not a huge fan of Barney. LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from Gungalo
It's just a bubble, nothing more --
just blow another three or four."
And that is how we came to be,
the best of friends you'll ever see.
Awesome quatrains Brooke and a beautiful story. This little boy Sawyer doesn't know how lucky he is yet. What with a grandma that can write stories for him, he's got it made!!!
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It's just a bubble, nothing more --
just blow another three or four."
And that is how we came to be,
the best of friends you'll ever see.
Awesome quatrains Brooke and a beautiful story. This little boy Sawyer doesn't know how lucky he is yet. What with a grandma that can write stories for him, he's got it made!!!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Treischel
That expression is priceless! Coupled with this sweet, heartwarming tale of a green monster blowing bubble gum,, I just had to smile! A delightful composition!
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That expression is priceless! Coupled with this sweet, heartwarming tale of a green monster blowing bubble gum,, I just had to smile! A delightful composition!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This was a very cute little piece.
A dragon ready to pout...just blow more bubbles.
This was just adorable.
Nice flow and fun read
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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This was a very cute little piece.
A dragon ready to pout...just blow more bubbles.
This was just adorable.
Nice flow and fun read
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013
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Barb, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful poem that the author has created here. The writer tells the reader a touching poem about family life and the joys that it can bring.
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This is a beautiful poem that the author has created here. The writer tells the reader a touching poem about family life and the joys that it can bring.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Bravo! Loud applause as you walk on stage to accept the Pulitzer Prize for a children's book of poetry. This is perfect. That's the only word for it!
That photo is the absolute CUTEST pic I have ever seen of a boy and his dad. I think it would make a great blow up to frame for the wall!
Drat, I am getting a message that I've awarded you a six the limit of four times. Well, it's not a six anyway... it's a ten. **********
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Bravo! Loud applause as you walk on stage to accept the Pulitzer Prize for a children's book of poetry. This is perfect. That's the only word for it!
That photo is the absolute CUTEST pic I have ever seen of a boy and his dad. I think it would make a great blow up to frame for the wall!
Drat, I am getting a message that I've awarded you a six the limit of four times. Well, it's not a six anyway... it's a ten. **********
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from playinaround
I enjoyed this very much Brooke! love the wording and the flow. Introduction to a new creature who chews bubble gum. a creature who gets scared and is comforted by the human. I just loved it. This poem makes me want to meet a green creature with sharp teeth an bubble gum! Thank you for sharing this one!
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I enjoyed this very much Brooke! love the wording and the flow. Introduction to a new creature who chews bubble gum. a creature who gets scared and is comforted by the human. I just loved it. This poem makes me want to meet a green creature with sharp teeth an bubble gum! Thank you for sharing this one!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
Comment from Connie C
I like how the green monster turns out to be an okay monster. Great little story, Brooke, one that I'm sure would appeal to children, not only because of the delightful story but the rhyme and meter which makes it a fun one to read aloud. I wonder if you got the idea or the "green" monster from the color of the bottom of Sawyer's shoes--just a thought.
As always, a pleasure to read.
Connie
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I like how the green monster turns out to be an okay monster. Great little story, Brooke, one that I'm sure would appeal to children, not only because of the delightful story but the rhyme and meter which makes it a fun one to read aloud. I wonder if you got the idea or the "green" monster from the color of the bottom of Sawyer's shoes--just a thought.
As always, a pleasure to read.
Connie
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
