CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Karen Fay
This indeed is a beautiful poem. Every line says so much. I think everybody needs to be held like this now and then, God Bless...Karen
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This indeed is a beautiful poem. Every line says so much. I think everybody needs to be held like this now and then, God Bless...Karen
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from WordPainter
A beautiful poem of mutual friendship and love. There are certain people in life that have the means to comfort us with their embrace and presence, and we in turn can comfort them. Just reading the poem and thinking of those special people is restful.
Blessings,
Lois
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A beautiful poem of mutual friendship and love. There are certain people in life that have the means to comfort us with their embrace and presence, and we in turn can comfort them. Just reading the poem and thinking of those special people is restful.
Blessings,
Lois
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
this is a very good poem i enjoyed reading it very much. it has a nice flow to it and it is not to long. i like the rhyme it is simple but effective
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this is a very good poem i enjoyed reading it very much. it has a nice flow to it and it is not to long. i like the rhyme it is simple but effective
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Kingsland
this poem is written with depth of emotions and good phrases.
your form and format work well for this as well. There is nothing for me to suggest for this well written verse.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
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this poem is written with depth of emotions and good phrases.
your form and format work well for this as well. There is nothing for me to suggest for this well written verse.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from thickwig
Your poem makes me feel cozy :)
You've got a simple rhyming scheme that helps the flow without making it sound too jingle-ey which would take away the mellow feel of the poem.
Keep writing.
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Your poem makes me feel cozy :)
You've got a simple rhyming scheme that helps the flow without making it sound too jingle-ey which would take away the mellow feel of the poem.
Keep writing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Prince of Life
A very well-written and thought-out piece. I enjoyed the imagery, and the overall presentation of the work. The flow was smooth from start to finish, and you expressed the theme quite well. Nice job...
V.K.
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A very well-written and thought-out piece. I enjoyed the imagery, and the overall presentation of the work. The flow was smooth from start to finish, and you expressed the theme quite well. Nice job...
V.K.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from rama devi
Sweet, gentle, sincere. Simplicity of tone is suiting the theme so softly! Deliciously tender and touching. I feel soothed by just reading it. :D
No nits. Good flow.
Warm regards,
rama devi
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Sweet, gentle, sincere. Simplicity of tone is suiting the theme so softly! Deliciously tender and touching. I feel soothed by just reading it. :D
No nits. Good flow.
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Hitcher
Now that was bloody very good friend, I really enjoyed Solace, it was very soothing and visually wonderful,
come rest with me now
In spirit, not a word
I give you no burden
Just my breath will be heard
Wow, my favorite by far!
That is my favorite poem that I have read of yours friend, if I still had a 6 you would have it.
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Now that was bloody very good friend, I really enjoyed Solace, it was very soothing and visually wonderful,
come rest with me now
In spirit, not a word
I give you no burden
Just my breath will be heard
Wow, my favorite by far!
That is my favorite poem that I have read of yours friend, if I still had a 6 you would have it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Donovan
This is a wonderful pen of intimacy and the solace one can receive from someone that cares. It says exactly what is needed and what happens. I like the line of reciprocity of feelings, well done.
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This is a wonderful pen of intimacy and the solace one can receive from someone that cares. It says exactly what is needed and what happens. I like the line of reciprocity of feelings, well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from utopian_dream_x
From the first two lines your poem oozed emotion.
I'm pleased that I read this poem because it is gorgeous piece of writing,
and while reading it I found that it flows very smoothly.
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From the first two lines your poem oozed emotion.
I'm pleased that I read this poem because it is gorgeous piece of writing,
and while reading it I found that it flows very smoothly.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008