CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
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Comment from ~Dovey
I really enjoyed this poem. In very simple style you have said so much. The picture is a very nice added touch. Excellent work! I wish you the best of luck in this contest! :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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I really enjoyed this poem. In very simple style you have said so much. The picture is a very nice added touch. Excellent work! I wish you the best of luck in this contest! :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Thank you, Dovey, for your very kind wishes and generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from jmyron
Tis as true of the canvas of words, the canvas of music, or the canvas of paint, Well written,vould almost have been made a Senryu.
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Tis as true of the canvas of words, the canvas of music, or the canvas of paint, Well written,vould almost have been made a Senryu.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Yes, they all can stare back at you!! You're right, it could be a cousin to the Senyru - Ha! So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your most kind review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Curt Mongold
Sue,
This is like a cross between a cinquain and a haiku! It is more difficult I think becuase if you are supposed to make it an expression of one and all, it greatly restricts the writer with content. You pulled this one off with ease my friend.
Sincerely,
Curt
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Sue,
This is like a cross between a cinquain and a haiku! It is more difficult I think becuase if you are supposed to make it an expression of one and all, it greatly restricts the writer with content. You pulled this one off with ease my friend.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Ahhhh!!! Yes! I did it! LOL! Let me tell you, these different forms are challenging! And I am so glad you like it...means so much. Thanks for your great review and such kind words. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Joan E.
As an artist who paints in acrylics, I know the feeling you have captured with your poem and picture.
The naani form seems perfect for your subject. I really enjoyed the line, "Wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius," with its personification.
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As an artist who paints in acrylics, I know the feeling you have captured with your poem and picture.
The naani form seems perfect for your subject. I really enjoyed the line, "Wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius," with its personification.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
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Joan, thank you for your very kind review and mostly for your specific comments. Thank you for highlighting the lines you liked. With regards, Sue
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - Yes, the artist's dreaded blank canvas which is synonymous with the writer's blank sheet. You captured the feeling well. I enjoyed the read. Charlie.
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Sue - Yes, the artist's dreaded blank canvas which is synonymous with the writer's blank sheet. You captured the feeling well. I enjoyed the read. Charlie.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
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Charlie, very glad you liked this poem. I thank you for your very kind words and generous review! With regards, Sue
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Sixteezkid .....
This is very cleverly worded in compliance with the requirements for the Naani format. What you have written
is easily understood and is thought-provoking. I specially like the words ... Wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
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Hullo Sixteezkid .....
This is very cleverly worded in compliance with the requirements for the Naani format. What you have written
is easily understood and is thought-provoking. I specially like the words ... Wanting to be brushed by strokes of genius.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Nanette Mary, I am so happy that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your lovely compliments and very generous review! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from LadyMary
Very much enjoyed this artistic passage. The subject is refreshing and the words chosen are so descriptive in a very concise writing. Well done. LadyMary
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Very much enjoyed this artistic passage. The subject is refreshing and the words chosen are so descriptive in a very concise writing. Well done. LadyMary
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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LadyMary, thank you for your very kind words, as I stay encouraged to continue to write in these (new-to-me) forms. And thanks you for your great review! With regards, Sue
Comment from Rar22
Loved this! Such a simple poem, yet the concept is so universal. I also love the title, it is a perfect fit once you have read the piece. Good luck!
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Loved this! Such a simple poem, yet the concept is so universal. I also love the title, it is a perfect fit once you have read the piece. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Rar22, thank you so much for your very kind review. So glad you liked it (and thanks for mentioning that you liked the title!) With regards, Sue
Comment from Gramma Kathy
Oooh, I LOVE this one! You have painted the perfect picture of artistry in only fifteen words and twent-two syllables.
You have given me an excellent lesson in Naani poetry. Someday I hope I can write as well as you do. :)
Exceptional!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Oooh, I LOVE this one! You have painted the perfect picture of artistry in only fifteen words and twent-two syllables.
You have given me an excellent lesson in Naani poetry. Someday I hope I can write as well as you do. :)
Exceptional!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Gramma Kathy, I am SO happy you really liked this work! I saw the contest and thought, 'why not'. And what was on my mind today was how much anxiety I have right now to get back to my painting. Such a sense of insecurity!!
Thank you VERY much for this most generous review. From my heart...Sue
Comment from eveeator
Excellent, love your thought behind this entry, the artwork is so great and your words make it even better. Think this is a really good entry and wish you luck with it in the contest, keep well regards
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Excellent, love your thought behind this entry, the artwork is so great and your words make it even better. Think this is a really good entry and wish you luck with it in the contest, keep well regards
Comment Written 02-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2008
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Thank you very much for your great review and lovely words. Much appreciated! With regards, Sue