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Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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The things you find when cleaning
Oh Fudge!
by Aiona

Hello, Aiona,

Great entry for the Minute contest. I can't say I like the presentation..the picture is disgusting. I guess you pranked your husband good.

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    I know! I was shocked too when I saw the picture! I knew there had to be an explanation, and I was glad when I remembered it!
Comment from Margaret Bednar
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I see you had fun with this. I am so glad you explained this photo! The first line of the last stanza is 9 syllables. Could you remove "Then"? or "Back came a memory flashing"

 Comment Written 25-May-2020

reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    LOL! Thank you! It's like "chocolate." I always say "chocolate" and "memory" with two syllables. I will change it.
reply by Margaret Bednar on 25-May-2020
    you could hyphenate it then, perhaps? It is in a contest and it will matter. :)
reply by Margaret Bednar on 25-May-2020
    Wait ... I read "scences" not scenes. NEVER MIND. It is eight :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
    LOL!