Daydreams from the Ashes
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2 total reviews
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
A sad reflection of a lost relationship.
Though you poem is that sad reflection, it is well written and easy to read and easy to understand.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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A sad reflection of a lost relationship.
Though you poem is that sad reflection, it is well written and easy to read and easy to understand.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I hope the regret came across well, because that was for sure the feeling.
Comment from samandlancelot
K,
This is beautiful. I love your repeated line and how you begin with hearing him better and seeing him better. But by the time you get to the end, you no longer feel him because you have released him and moved on.
Exceptional!
Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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K,
This is beautiful. I love your repeated line and how you begin with hearing him better and seeing him better. But by the time you get to the end, you no longer feel him because you have released him and moved on.
Exceptional!
Patricia
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing! There was definitely an element of regret and letting go that was part of those emotions. I?m glad they came across.