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Senryu (his will prevails)

An emotional true story of Babe Ruth.

4 total reviews 
Comment from samandlancelot
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I enjoyed your history lesson. Although I've certainly heard of Babe Ruth, I didn't know all that you shared. Excitement is an excellent emotion for your senryu poem.

Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Senryu or Human Haiku clearly states Babe's skill, and his will at incredible baseball performance, to make his fans go wild; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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Comment from Drew Delaney
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The poem is really cool. Also, the picture and the notes. I remember seeing a movie about his life. Baseball was my favourite sport as a young person. All my kids played the sport too. Now the grandkids are. Funny how that goes.
Drew

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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Comment from January L'Angelle
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This is an exciting poem. I'm a baseball fan and a big fan of The Babe. "Whack the fans go wild" is perfect! That's exactly how it happened. I enjoyed this poem. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2020

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    Thank you for your message and review. I hope you read the author notes too.