LOVE OF NATURE
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Seasons Change "Eclectic
7 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely play with these words with the snow blankets and the sleeping seeds readying to 'rise from their beds' and bloom for spring. Lovely three line poem Trisha, enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Lovely play with these words with the snow blankets and the sleeping seeds readying to 'rise from their beds' and bloom for spring. Lovely three line poem Trisha, enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thanks very much, I?m glad you enjoyed it
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Bucketlist
Your three lines with you rhyming words makes one feel that spring is on it's merry way. When ever that will be!
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Smiles to you Bucketlist
Your three lines with you rhyming words makes one feel that spring is on it's merry way. When ever that will be!
Gert
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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That?s good! In reality it maybe late May before it gets to you LOL.Thanks for reviewing, Gert,
Hugs, Trisha
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You are Bucketlist
Gert
Comment from Bicpen
Its good but requires a little imagination to lift thefertility of the rejuvenated soil to expand on a more prominent and delightful bouquet of colour bursting with more enthusiasm and delivering a more productive crop. It has a clear voice with a good three lines which has the developed understanding of a somewhat seasonal idea and is flavoured with a touch of purity it just needs to perk up a little and grow a more fragrant bloom. It is not to be chopped down or even removed from its standing as a ornamental figure but more put on the list of what is the natures cupboard.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Its good but requires a little imagination to lift thefertility of the rejuvenated soil to expand on a more prominent and delightful bouquet of colour bursting with more enthusiasm and delivering a more productive crop. It has a clear voice with a good three lines which has the developed understanding of a somewhat seasonal idea and is flavoured with a touch of purity it just needs to perk up a little and grow a more fragrant bloom. It is not to be chopped down or even removed from its standing as a ornamental figure but more put on the list of what is the natures cupboard.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Are you a Mensa member? Your painstaking reviews are far beyond the average, and the detailed explanation is something I?ve not encountered. I am grateful for that, although I don?t get why you invest so much effort into my literary posts. A simple ?thanks? for that
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful sentiment as the spring allows these buds to flower and bring the joy of spring here Trisha, much enjoyed and I hope the blanket has melted now, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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A wonderful sentiment as the spring allows these buds to flower and bring the joy of spring here Trisha, much enjoyed and I hope the blanket has melted now, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I love Spring,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
As snow blankets leave
nature wakes up sleeping seeds
To rise from their beds
Love the description but I would leave off the capitals because they seem to throw it off.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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As snow blankets leave
nature wakes up sleeping seeds
To rise from their beds
Love the description but I would leave off the capitals because they seem to throw it off.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Your valid opinion is my directive LOL Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the seasons that frequently change and we are always the most excited when we change from winter to Spring.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about the seasons that frequently change and we are always the most excited when we change from winter to Spring.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you as always
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This lovely verse tells of a the snow leaving and seeds rising from their beds.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poetry contest.
This lovely verse tells of a the snow leaving and seeds rising from their beds.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you, I?m glad you enjoyed the poem
Hugs, Trisha
Congratulations for winning the non fiction story contest.