Falling Rain
A Nonet56 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
It is wonderful how this poem comes together yo make perfect sense. It flows wonderfully too. The rhyming is very good. I just love your nonet, Kahpot!
All the very best in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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It is wonderful how this poem comes together yo make perfect sense. It flows wonderfully too. The rhyming is very good. I just love your nonet, Kahpot!
All the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was fun to create this one****kahpot
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
I have never tried a nonet before but feel inspired to give it a go now. It appears to be very tricky but when executed well, as yours certainly is, it both reads and looks so effective. I like your rhymes and how you turned something as seemingly mundane as the evaporation cycle into an exquisite poem. I also find such inspiration in the sky and the picture with the rainbow really finishes it off perfectly. I think you did a wonderful job for your first nonet x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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I have never tried a nonet before but feel inspired to give it a go now. It appears to be very tricky but when executed well, as yours certainly is, it both reads and looks so effective. I like your rhymes and how you turned something as seemingly mundane as the evaporation cycle into an exquisite poem. I also find such inspiration in the sky and the picture with the rainbow really finishes it off perfectly. I think you did a wonderful job for your first nonet x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Wow! thank you very much, you should try one they are fun, yes there is a lot of inspiration in the sky, many thanks****kahpot
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I may give it a try, you?ve inspired me so thank you x
Comment from Joan E.
I always enjoy the shape and sensibility of a good nonet. I enjoyed your addition of rhyme, which made the poem much more difficult to create but added to its intensity. The shape echoes falling rain as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I always enjoy the shape and sensibility of a good nonet. I enjoyed your addition of rhyme, which made the poem much more difficult to create but added to its intensity. The shape echoes falling rain as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes the shape does have an effect****kahpot
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Well-structured Nonet poem telling us the story of Earth recycling water with "falling rain." The poem flows like the raindrops of which it speaks. Charming picture. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Well-structured Nonet poem telling us the story of Earth recycling water with "falling rain." The poem flows like the raindrops of which it speaks. Charming picture. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was a fun write****kahpot
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It was a fun read, too.
Comment from ioana.u
Wow! That was definitely not easy to write! I don't write poetry, but this was amazing, I really admire you! You followed the strict rules and painted a beautiful picture at the same time.
Good luck in the contest!
Ioana
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Wow! That was definitely not easy to write! I don't write poetry, but this was amazing, I really admire you! You followed the strict rules and painted a beautiful picture at the same time.
Good luck in the contest!
Ioana
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was fun to write****kahpot
Comment from Sally Law
I agree, this is your all time best. Outstanding nonet you have here; perfectly formatted and beautifully done. I wish you all the best and in the contest. This will fare well.
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I agree, this is your all time best. Outstanding nonet you have here; perfectly formatted and beautifully done. I wish you all the best and in the contest. This will fare well.
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Wow! thank you for this excellent feedback and review****kahpot
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
A really strong contest entry. I think it will do well. It takes some thought and time to put this together. I have tried them with limited success. The imagery is very nice. Cowboy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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A really strong contest entry. I think it will do well. It takes some thought and time to put this together. I have tried them with limited success. The imagery is very nice. Cowboy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much and yes they can be tricky****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Falling Rain, has the proper descending nine-to-one syllable frame and includes a proper rhyme scheme to complete the cycle of rain. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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This nonet, Falling Rain, has the proper descending nine-to-one syllable frame and includes a proper rhyme scheme to complete the cycle of rain. Nice.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was fun****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've never written a nonet, but must try one. You've really done a good job with yours, its syllables are perfect on each line, and you've even manage to make it rhyme. Well done for that! I like your theme too, it is exactly that, a continuous cycle like most things in natures plan. Good luck in the contest, you've a good chance with this one. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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I've never written a nonet, but must try one. You've really done a good job with yours, its syllables are perfect on each line, and you've even manage to make it rhyme. Well done for that! I like your theme too, it is exactly that, a continuous cycle like most things in natures plan. Good luck in the contest, you've a good chance with this one. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you and yes you should try one they are a fun poem to create****kahpot
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Dear Kahpot,
Not only is the artwork stunning, but this is probably the best Nonet that I have seen. I can see why it hit on Fan Story as an All Time Best poem and was recognized. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Dear Kahpot,
Not only is the artwork stunning, but this is probably the best Nonet that I have seen. I can see why it hit on Fan Story as an All Time Best poem and was recognized. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, for this wonderful review****kahpot
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You're welcome. Cheers, Fonda