Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Crystal"Dawn of Chaos
27 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is another deep and thoughtful poem from you. I love your word choices and how your poem takes it time in sharing the story. Well done and creative.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is another deep and thoughtful poem from you. I love your word choices and how your poem takes it time in sharing the story. Well done and creative.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This thought was my original intent, suffering pits in my writes, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed views.
Comment from Mary Furlong
I am intrigued by this. I read it three times and could read it any number of times more without discerning the depth of what you mean. That's not a criticism, just an observation. I found myself trying to mentally punctuate the piece, and I did succeed in picking out possible phrases. I wish I were smart enough to comment further. Good luck with your book.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I am intrigued by this. I read it three times and could read it any number of times more without discerning the depth of what you mean. That's not a criticism, just an observation. I found myself trying to mentally punctuate the piece, and I did succeed in picking out possible phrases. I wish I were smart enough to comment further. Good luck with your book.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I wish I was smart enough to express my thoughts more precisely. Thanking you for your generous rate despite my shortcomings. I welcome your comments or given advive.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This needs punctuation or something. It's just a strong of words without it. I must say I'm a little bit confused when I read things like this. Keep up the writing, though.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This needs punctuation or something. It's just a strong of words without it. I must say I'm a little bit confused when I read things like this. Keep up the writing, though.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Yeah got to try having my pits to confront, thanking you for your opinion prevailing this work and your generous rate despite flaws. Welcoming your reviews on my other works.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Error and trial a complicated trick indeed. Heart like a crystal gleaming like a crystal through good and bad, but staying true to the one love. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Error and trial a complicated trick indeed. Heart like a crystal gleaming like a crystal through good and bad, but staying true to the one love. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Your words are touching their statements illustrate many good aspects pertained in this write. Thanking you for your generous rate and appreciated viewpoints.
Comment from Wendy Winter
I will have to read this over several times more. It presents to me something like a riddle or a message that needs to be decoded. Clever choice of words. Grabs you, pulls you in. I feel I may have understood it more on a subliminal level. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I will have to read this over several times more. It presents to me something like a riddle or a message that needs to be decoded. Clever choice of words. Grabs you, pulls you in. I feel I may have understood it more on a subliminal level. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Enjoy dissecting this particular read, providing a tip I was thinking about God's throne, sitting someone making decisions, developed a surprising read. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from The Manoj Arora1
I'm sorry but I didn't understand anything. Kindly elaborate in a reply so I can understand and provide constructive feedback.
Thanks and cheers! Keep writing!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I'm sorry but I didn't understand anything. Kindly elaborate in a reply so I can understand and provide constructive feedback.
Thanks and cheers! Keep writing!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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No problem, tried efforts was an individual whom had no choice, played by God to do good or bad deeds, give other rewards. Thanking you for you generous rate and your interesting viewpoint.
Comment from papa55mike
Trials may prove strength, but joy will always come in the morning with God's grace. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your witing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Trials may prove strength, but joy will always come in the morning with God's grace. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your witing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Glad aspects in this write were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and delighting words.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Life's balance is a very tricky thing. I do not discount the existence of the Architect just because someone may have found the blueprints. Such things are not mutually exclusive.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Life's balance is a very tricky thing. I do not discount the existence of the Architect just because someone may have found the blueprints. Such things are not mutually exclusive.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A very profound statement, hoping this comment was a positive prevailing this write. Thanking you for the generous rate and welcomed viewpoint.
Comment from Frederick Samson
I really enjoyed this poem. I found it very powerful and thought provoking. The structure is extremely unique and I could feel the sharpness of each sentence. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed this poem. I found it very powerful and thought provoking. The structure is extremely unique and I could feel the sharpness of each sentence. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Glad some aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm conveyance.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Crystal"
Is deeply rooted and religious.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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"Crystal"
Is deeply rooted and religious.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
....
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I wish those statements were true, not saying they are not, trying to improve those aspects. Glad certain aspects in this write were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for generous rate and warming statement.