Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This tells of the life and death of a loving person who has had most of her friends die before her, it seems. It also shows that we can feel those love ones that have died and know they help us through life without them.

Keep writing

Joan

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Hi Joan, sorry this reply is so late, I've been away for nearly two weeks. Thank you so much for reading the last part of this book. I'm already working on the last one in the trilogy. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Thank you! Big hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by dragonpoet on 21-Jun-2018

You're very welcome, Sandra.

Joan

Comment from Contests

A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018

Thank you so very much! xxxx

Comment from BeasPeas

Exceptional

This is excellent, Sandra. Such a touching chapter. Described well. Story flows easily from one line to the next. I like how you have mentioned "I could see plainly it was Mildred ... but she was much younger. Once again she was the Mildred I knew when she was about thirty years of age." This comment is appropriate for spirit as all accounts agree with it. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2018

Oh,, thank you, Marilyn! I've been off the site for a few days. My brother has been in intensive care, so I didn't know I'd been nominated. What a lovely review, and to give me one of your precious 6 when it's no longer paying out, is so nice of you. I've been reading up on spirits, and they do say that. I'm hoping to be about thirty-five, that was my best year! LOL. I'll be starting my last book in the trilogy, soon, already got the plot all worked out. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by BeasPeas on 03-Jun-2018

You're welcome, Sandra. Good job. Marilyn

Comment from rwilliam

Exceptional

OH!! YAY ! YAY! YAY! Mildred is still with her. Oh, I'm. so. happy. YIPPEE!!! :-D

I'm so excited to read on. Mildred will still be with us. Sigh of relief. LOL

Wonderful chapter. You had me in tears in the beginning and smiles at the end.

Well done you.:-)

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

LOL!!!! I'm over the moon you're happy now! lol. Mildred is now able to feature more in the story as she can come along with Veronica. It should prove to be funny and sad as she does tend to let her emotions run riot. I think that's what most readers like about her. I can't thank you enough for your amazing support of my novel, Rebecca, you have been wonderful. Thank you for yet another 6 stars! What can I say, 3 of your allocation of sixes on my book, my face is just hurting with the size of my smiles. Biggest ever hugs, my friend. Hope to see you next time. Sandra xxxxx

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

What a lovely finish-up or is it? I feel more adventures are on hand and I hope I'm right! Your "for now" is the perfect tease.
I'm happy to be back reading your stories.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Yes, more to come in the final (?) book in the trilogy. I'll be starting that soon. Thank you so much for your lovely review, Beck, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the end of this novel. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Sandramitchell,
It's a nice piece of fiction having impressive and matching the theme phraseology; smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Interesting Indeed!

 Comment Written 19-May-2018

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reply by the author on 19-May-2018

Thank you so very much for your really lovely review and all those stars! That is so kind of you. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xxx

reply by RPSaxena on 26-May-2018

Sandra, Most Welcome!
~ RP

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

My throat twisted. I couldn't breathe as invisible hands squeezed my neck, wringing it like an old dishcloth, filling my head with unbearable pain ... but I didn't care--it was better than the anguish that was ripping my heart apart.

I love your imagery
Well penned. It's hard jumping into a story midstream but this is great writing. Congrats on your book
God bless

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

Thank you so much, Kiwijenny, for your really lovely review. This is the end of the second book in the trilogy, the third will start after I've finished editing this one. I do so appreciate what you said, and thank you for the congrats! God bless you, too, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from dweigt

Exceptional

Two sixes from me in one week! I must be going soft.

Seriously, this is excellent and I found nothing to correct or suggest. I especially love how you ended on a happy note and set a hook for the next adventure. Good luck on the book, it deserves to do well.

Keep writing!

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

Aww, Bless your heart! Thank you so very much for the 'second' 6 stars in one week!! You have made my day with your lovely comments and good luck wishes for the book. I'm really so grateful to you and all the people who have been so encouraging and I can't thank you enough. I'll be starting the next book after this one has been edited. I hope you will join me in that 'next adventure' as I would love to have your company. Biggest hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Wow reading this has been incredible Sandra thankyou for sharing your talent with us I am not a pretty crier myself I cry less these days my feelings a lot more numbed but as a child I cried all the time. I was very sensitive. I still am but I don't show it. Thanks for this wonderful write! Love and regards Meia x

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

Thank you, Meia, for the lovely review!! I've loved having you throughout the book, you've been a wonderful supporter. Thank you! And biggest hugs. :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Sandra,
First, congratulations on finishing this wonderful novel in your series. Ten Stars!

Now for the sad part, Mildred is no longer with us, that is, among the living.
It's not the same, being a spirit. No, it's just not the same.
But, better a spirit than a corpse! lol

Of course, you realize you've now endowed the POWERS with far more power than before.
Time travel is one thing, but power over life and death and the after- life makes them like gods. Hmmm...

Still, this should make for interesting, fun reading in the next novel.
It will be like meeting the Mildred of the first novel, but as an "angel or emissary" of the POWERS. Of course, Mildred says "I aint no ghost." So I don't know exactly what she is, other than a great, fun character. Reminds me of the It's a Wonderful Life and The Bishops Wife, among others.

Let the future begin...

Wish I had a six left, maybe the Powers can send me one.

Robert

 Comment Written 18-May-2018

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reply by the author on 18-May-2018

The thing I love most about fiction, I can do what I want within reason. The powers that be are just there to allow me to do it. Apart from that, they wouldn't dare argue with Mildred! lol. Of course, we don't know, (I certainly don't) if Mildred and the powers are from another planet! Hmm. Little green men in the next one? 'Oh, Lordy, Master Robert, not on your nelly!' lol.

Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews you have given me throughout my two books, Robert. You have been a fabulous friend and so encouraging in your comments. I'll get this one up and running and then start the next book. Big hugs! Sandra xxxx