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Daily poems for April 2018

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Comment from tfawcus
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Now that must be the most oxymoronic poem that I have ever read. If anyone didn't know the meaning of the word, they sure do now! A delightful Jekyll and Hide pen picture that shows the endless contradictions in the human character! Much enjoyed!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Tony, Thank you so very much and I enjoyed the challenge of writing this one I find myself often in an Oxymoronic ( Is that a word) state more often than not Ha Ha .Your six stars have made my day Cheers Christine
Comment from Rasmine
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Hello, Chrissy, :)

Again! This is a well-written poem with great rhyming and beat. The rhythm is great, just keep writing like this. The rhyme is just right.

Take care,
Nome

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Nome, Thank you for reading my poem Sometimes I do wonder about myself LOL This is my favourite style of writing I love rhyme Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
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Love itm. All for fine poetic verse with every comma in place....but ad in lfe isn't it just stress r e lieving yo get a goofy gighle going?
Besides....."OXYMORON" takes my award for most sounding like exactly what it means! Smiles!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Karenina, Thank you for you fun review and yes it is a great word LOL I womder how they came up with the definition of this word Oxymoron. Cheers Christine
reply by karenina on 28-Apr-2018
    I don't know....but I'm on eof those crazies who will stop and wonder why people say "Cute as a button" when buttons aren't cute at all....so when I find a word that fits itself so well I'm happy!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Yes Ha Ha cute as a button is a funny one Cheers
Comment from Harry Smith
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I can't believe I am able to read two in a row. Another exceptionally well written poem that is loaded with both imagery and emotions and it flows smoothly. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Harry, Thank you and are they together That is good I loved writing this one as sometimes I find myself in a state of opposition and just laugh so this came to mind Cheers Christine
Comment from damommy
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Your use of these oxymoronic phrases is great. Language is a funny thing, isn't it. 'Pretty ugly' is one we use a lot.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Yvonne, Thank you and I do like pretty ugly I find something lovely in ugly things Ha Ha Had fun with this one trouble is it is true half the time LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Your well written and well rhymed verse tells of the contradictions that make us who we are. A little of this and that. Never dull.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Sharon, Thank you and hopefully never dull a bit Ditzy at times LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
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You've got some really good oxymorons in this fun post, Christine. Clearly confused, lol, good one and so is loud silence. When you think of it, the way we put language together is quite amusing.

Very much enjoyed reading this one.

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Hi Gloria, Thanks and often clearly confused LOL still at least ai am still aware of this LOL some times the silence is deafening so I keep my earplugs handy Ha Ha. Cheers for your read Christine
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
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Christine--What a clever poem. This should probably go into a grammar book for children, becasue it is the perfect description of an oxymoron. Excellent graphic! Well done!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
    Hi Susan, Thank you Ha Ha That in itself may be an oxymoron Grammar and Children .
    Sometimes I wonder what they learn at school for Grammar, spelling and maths seem to be lacking in many children and young adult. Being a teacher of Nursing students Sometimes my mind boggles with their inability to do any of these things correctly Still they may learn one day Hmmm Ha Ha Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about being in a state of oxymoron where we feel the opne thing while we doing or feel the opposite at the same time. It can be frustrating at times.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2018
    Hi Sandra, Thank you and yes it can be frustrating to be in two minds Still gives good source for a poem LOL Cheers Christine