Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twenty-syllable poem, Who Would You Choose to Be This Person, makes the last laughter heard a the best way to go out.

 Comment Written 05-May-2018

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Yep. That only means its a big pay back and most times it feels good. Just when it seems like its over, the odds all roll over in your favor and all of a sudden that little smirk comes over your face and that look that says "Got ya!"

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

So very true and the last laugh is after all, the best. Very clever poem, perfect visual too. I like that he is setting in the sand seemingly very content, even happy. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I know a guy who looks like that guy, and he laughs a lot. this is a playful little haiku thing. best of luck in the upcoming contest. I like that guy.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018

Comment from Katya

Excellent

Well, it is cute, but I'm not sure I understand it all that well. Would YOU choose to be that person? Knowing that would give m enough orientation to understand what you are getting at.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2018