April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Every day"Daily poems for April 2018
9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Every Day, kind of makes a big thing out of making your life seem great. That great to read about. Enjoy.
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
This twenty-syllable poem, Every Day, kind of makes a big thing out of making your life seem great. That great to read about. Enjoy.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Hi Bill Thank you for ypur review and I am pleased you found it a great read. Many Thanks Cheers Christine
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Hi Bill Thank you for ypur review and I am pleased you found it a great read. Many Thanks Cheers Christine
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Hi Bill Thank you for ypur review and I am pleased you found it a great read. Many Thanks Cheers Christine
Comment from Miriam Collins
Very nice poem! I like the inspiration behind your poem, and how you displayed it. I absolutely love the ending, "And all it brings" which I feel entails even the bad things that sometimes happen in life. Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
Very nice poem! I like the inspiration behind your poem, and how you displayed it. I absolutely love the ending, "And all it brings" which I feel entails even the bad things that sometimes happen in life. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Poetrypearls, Thank you for your review and yes life is pretty good for me Cheers
Comment from Sherman541
The picture is perfect for the poem. You are so happy it would appear and seem. Which is really very nice. I happy for you. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
The picture is perfect for the poem. You are so happy it would appear and seem. Which is really very nice. I happy for you. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Sherman551. Thank you for reading my poem for this contest and yes happy and free in a beautiful country Cheers For yoir best wishes ad good luck
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You are most welcome :) I see that I made a mistake, I am very happy for you, it should say.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love your darling little poem that shows that you are content in your world. It is a very cheerful verse that encourages us all to be happy with what we have. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
I love your darling little poem that shows that you are content in your world. It is a very cheerful verse that encourages us all to be happy with what we have. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
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Hi Sugarray77. Thank you for reading my poem and I hope everyone can fell happy sometimes Life is good Cheers
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 20 syllable poem for the prompt about if you could turn back time would you change anything. Your answer was no. Very good words and imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
This is a very well written 20 syllable poem for the prompt about if you could turn back time would you change anything. Your answer was no. Very good words and imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi Teri Thank you and no changing anything pretty luck really Have a great day Cheers
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, such a happy poem for the 20 syllables poetry contest. Great picture and I'm glad you wouldn't change as it means you are happy and content. Best of luck with this poem, Ana.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
Hello, such a happy poem for the 20 syllables poetry contest. Great picture and I'm glad you wouldn't change as it means you are happy and content. Best of luck with this poem, Ana.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi Ana, Thank you and no change needed Cheers Have a lovely day
Comment from meeshu
nicely said in so few syllables. very uplifting and positive perspective on life and life's tribulations. good luck with the prompt contest, this should do well.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
nicely said in so few syllables. very uplifting and positive perspective on life and life's tribulations. good luck with the prompt contest, this should do well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi meeshu, Thank you and worth an entry I hope Cheers
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of being content with your lot in life.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
I think this is a good entry for the 20 Syllable Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of being content with your lot in life.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi Sharon, Thank you for your wonderful rating and review I thought I would have a go at this one Glad I did Cheers for yur good luck message.
Comment from victor 66
Your twenty syllable count is right on. And, who can argue about a life being well spent? I have no corrections to suggest and I wish you well in the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
Your twenty syllable count is right on. And, who can argue about a life being well spent? I have no corrections to suggest and I wish you well in the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018
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Hi Victor, I hope so and Thank you for your review and best wishes. Life is pretty good Cheers
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You are most welcome, Mystery Poet.