April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Payout"Daily poems for April 2018
15 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
My name is Parky
And I'm here to say
I started my travels yesterday
So I should be there by 1 May
If slowpoke worms don't impede my way
Cos full speed ahead is my prayer today!
Very cute, I loved it (that's me -Parky)
Hugs,Trisha
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
My name is Parky
And I'm here to say
I started my travels yesterday
So I should be there by 1 May
If slowpoke worms don't impede my way
Cos full speed ahead is my prayer today!
Very cute, I loved it (that's me -Parky)
Hugs,Trisha
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hi Trisha, Ha ha well done Parky so cute and full speed ahead. May is coming up so fast I can barely keep up with writing and so far behind in reviewing. but determined to get there Cheers Christine
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You?re welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well the humor of the limerick does shine through. I find limerick's hard to write because of trying to get the meter and rhythm just right. Cute picture, too!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
Lol. Well the humor of the limerick does shine through. I find limerick's hard to write because of trying to get the meter and rhythm just right. Cute picture, too!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hi lyenochka, Thank for your review Ha Ha and yes limerick can be hard to get the meter bit it was a fun write and I loved this image also Cheers Christine
Comment from robyn corum
Christine,
Well - that was fun! I was reading along... not sure at all where we were going!!! *smile* Sounds like maybe that's the way you were writing that one, too!!! Fun! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Christine,
Well - that was fun! I was reading along... not sure at all where we were going!!! *smile* Sounds like maybe that's the way you were writing that one, too!!! Fun! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Robyn, Ha Ha neother was I until the last line and yes it was just for fun and added to my April challenge getting there. It is difficult to keep up bit ai am determined to do 30 PS Going broke at the same time Cheers Christine
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Christine--What an excellent limerick. Your drawing confused me a bit, but I understand that you were writing off of its title. Just a thought--write another one about a turtle with a pack on its shoulder? Your nursery rhyme series could well use a creative drawing. Anyways, your graphic intrigues me, and your poem is perfect! Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Christine--What an excellent limerick. Your drawing confused me a bit, but I understand that you were writing off of its title. Just a thought--write another one about a turtle with a pack on its shoulder? Your nursery rhyme series could well use a creative drawing. Anyways, your graphic intrigues me, and your poem is perfect! Well done!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Susan, I wote the limerick and then searched for a good image and this turtle just appealed to me cute isn't it. My last line referred to the review payout LOL not much for this one I'm afraid. Thanks so mich for your review though Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. What a cute little guy. Love the colors. I like your limerick. I've only written a couple of them myself, but it is a fun form. We are already more than half way through the month. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Hi Christine. What a cute little guy. Love the colors. I like your limerick. I've only written a couple of them myself, but it is a fun form. We are already more than half way through the month. Marilyn
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Marilyn, yes he is cute bit ai wrote the limerick first up and then found this image and thought it may match LOL Yes half way through I am a bot behind but will make up soon I hope. It is costing me a small fortune also Thanks for your support Cheers Christine
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I think all of us a behind, Christine. LOL! I usually try to "save up" my funny money knowing that the yearly NaPoWriMo is coming up. Just do the best you can.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very cute, Christine. When in doubt a Limerick will always work out, well maybe not always but most of the time.
Excellent and keep em coming you're past the hump mark.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Very cute, Christine. When in doubt a Limerick will always work out, well maybe not always but most of the time.
Excellent and keep em coming you're past the hump mark.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Gloria, Yes that is the strength of it I was getting a bit desperate and though this may get me out of strife LOL Yes they are coming I an a wee bit behind but will make up ground on the weekend I hope. Thanks and many Cheers Christine
Comment from damommy
Absolutely precious picture.
You're doing so well with a poem every day. How you manage to come up with ideas like this is amazing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Absolutely precious picture.
You're doing so well with a poem every day. How you manage to come up with ideas like this is amazing.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Yvonne, Thank you and I must admit I have surprised myself but it is a bit hard especially when I work and then need to do one A bit behind but getting there Thanks so much for your lovely support. I am so behind in revoewing everyones elses bit will try hard to read them also Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
This was rather cute to read Christine. It was sweet, short and simple to read, with an excellent rhyme pattern. I dearly enjoyed the picture you chose, it just said it all and fit perfectly with your words. Well done thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
This was rather cute to read Christine. It was sweet, short and simple to read, with an excellent rhyme pattern. I dearly enjoyed the picture you chose, it just said it all and fit perfectly with your words. Well done thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary, Thanks you so much and I though A limerick may be a short but fun one to do and loved to find this turtle he is so cute. Cheers Christine
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You are so welcome Christine.
Comment from Debra White
Hi Christine :)
Currently paying at 1 point and 47 member cents!
I enjoyed your limerick - it entertained me, which is really the whole point of a limerick, so job well done!
Kind regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
Hi Christine :)
Currently paying at 1 point and 47 member cents!
I enjoyed your limerick - it entertained me, which is really the whole point of a limerick, so job well done!
Kind regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Debra, Thank you and I am afraid it wont pay much more as this is costing me a fortune to do a poem a day and then trying to promote it every day I spend about $30 .00 so By the time I finish for the month it will have cost about $800 dollars. Just as well I work and this is a real indulgence on my part. Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The little hobo in the picture is on an adventure and your Limerick-type poem is cheerful and positive, days always pay me back with smiles, hope your day is good, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
The little hobo in the picture is on an adventure and your Limerick-type poem is cheerful and positive, days always pay me back with smiles, hope your day is good, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hi Dolly, Thank you very much Dolly I do so love to hear from you and trying to reciprocate as often as I can. Keep smiling my friend Cheers Christine