To Further the Rights to My Heart
My thoughts on Jay.36 total reviews
Comment from Caressa_08
Your story is that of what occurred is still vivid in your memory about your son, Jay, who because of his death from this Earth... is helping so many survive, and still almost a decade and a half...they are alive, I do think. And really believe he is proud of his dad, as you are of him....in his heavenly home.
God Bless...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Your story is that of what occurred is still vivid in your memory about your son, Jay, who because of his death from this Earth... is helping so many survive, and still almost a decade and a half...they are alive, I do think. And really believe he is proud of his dad, as you are of him....in his heavenly home.
God Bless...Caressa_08
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks again Caressa...
Love,
Ricky1024.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Beautiful and passionate/compassionate piece with a very important message. Thank you for writing and sharing and raising awareness.
only 2 typos-
...(then instead of than) his only wife...
...before (you're instead of your) forever imprisoned...
Blessings
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Beautiful and passionate/compassionate piece with a very important message. Thank you for writing and sharing and raising awareness.
only 2 typos-
...(then instead of than) his only wife...
...before (you're instead of your) forever imprisoned...
Blessings
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thanks for the support and the typos.
Most take away instead of correct which,
I believe is cruel, putting down the artist's....
"Written Word."
Ricky1024.
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You're welcome. Benefits of mild OCD, LOL. Blessings.
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OCD? that's my ex named Fancy, Pancy, Nancy!!!
Ricky1024
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LOL - OCD sounds better than 'picky b###ch'
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picky b####ch?
Order one up for me 'Medium rare!'
Ricky...
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:-D
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ricky. Sometimes your writing just gets to me. I like many others feel your loss however, I am certain it's like being born into your next experience. Too many things tell me it's not the end only the earthly end. Great write my friend. Sending huggs. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky. Sometimes your writing just gets to me. I like many others feel your loss however, I am certain it's like being born into your next experience. Too many things tell me it's not the end only the earthly end. Great write my friend. Sending huggs. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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I write hard and try hard to quill the Grief...
But kiwi, it is so hard sometimes with no one home?
Thanks my Dear for your endless words...
Ricky...
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I wish I had the answers Ricky but, I believe we are all on a designated path chosen by us before we are born of our parents. Each of us learn what we need to know and suffer what we need to suffer in order to be released and renewed within grace to see this life through. Your faith is important to you and it clearly shows in each line you write. When it's time for life to be "easy" it will be. Keep writing it out my friend. Sending nothing by hugs your friend deborah
Comment from WriterKathy
I'm sorry for your loss. I can tell you feel it deeply. I could do without the offensive word you inserted in there. I think your point could still be made. That word doesn't go along with "Special thanks goes out to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ" just my opinion. Overall, it was a good read.
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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I'm sorry for your loss. I can tell you feel it deeply. I could do without the offensive word you inserted in there. I think your point could still be made. That word doesn't go along with "Special thanks goes out to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ" just my opinion. Overall, it was a good read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Well your sorry? You should be for Jay used that word since a baby. Learned it from his mom who commited suicide only 8 months after Jason's death.
He sais Sorry the next line.
And God loves him so much He took Jason to save otters
all the countless reviews on my work for Jason and this subject garnered 5 and 6 stars,
One a week ago got All Times Best.
Just a thought.
I never give less than a five unless the piece was horrid.
Note the clause was activated for language?
Why then did you review?
24..
Comment from pbomar1115
I feel you are deeply attached to someone who is no longer with us: your dad. Then I looked at the picture and thought your brother is included. I feel your loss because I lost a brother more recent than 2003. Your words were touching.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I feel you are deeply attached to someone who is no longer with us: your dad. Then I looked at the picture and thought your brother is included. I feel your loss because I lost a brother more recent than 2003. Your words were touching.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Just Jay my Son.
Passed away in 2003 at 18.
Idiot driving the race car..
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
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I'm sorry for your loss.
Phillip
Comment from JW
Hmm. This is different.
Organ donation is a good thing and provides life-sharing opportunities for those in need.
Unfortunately, though, I'm afraid my body is such, it will only be good for cremation.
Thanks for sharing this, Ricky1024. JW
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hmm. This is different.
Organ donation is a good thing and provides life-sharing opportunities for those in need.
Unfortunately, though, I'm afraid my body is such, it will only be good for cremation.
Thanks for sharing this, Ricky1024. JW
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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JW..
Thanks and hit the GYM!
My friend Joe needs a kidney!
Ricky...
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Thanks for the suggestion. However, with having health problems that begin with having congestive heart failure - my cardiologist wouldn't agree I should do that. :-)
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I had a Heart Attack once, maybe my old Heart.
It's not much good to me any who.
It just keeps me alive...
Tee, hee, hee!
Ricky...
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Comment from Tpa
Beautifully created. Your story conveyed a topic for all to heed and you skillfully exercised it in a magnificent way. I was truly touch by your words and contribution to society.WELL DONE
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Beautifully created. Your story conveyed a topic for all to heed and you skillfully exercised it in a magnificent way. I was truly touch by your words and contribution to society.WELL DONE
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks for this.
Reviews should be from the heart and not the mind.
You have a big heart...
Ricky1024
Comment from smbau
The author narrates to further the rights to my heart. Mentions we have no choice at birth likewise no choice at death. Our choice is 'Opportunity.." to make living the best we can and bless others even at point of death by being an organ donor "I Died So You Could Live?". Liked the different story structure and flow of content.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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The author narrates to further the rights to my heart. Mentions we have no choice at birth likewise no choice at death. Our choice is 'Opportunity.." to make living the best we can and bless others even at point of death by being an organ donor "I Died So You Could Live?". Liked the different story structure and flow of content.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I call this...
"Sistering"
When you write two similar poems at once. Better impact I've found.
Thanks smbau.
Ricky1024
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Thanks for sharing. Beautiful piece of work.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Ricky,
I think coming to terms with loss is one of the hardest things we have to do. I'm also not convinced that we every truly do. We say we do, but in those quiet moments... I'm not so sure.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky,
I think coming to terms with loss is one of the hardest things we have to do. I'm also not convinced that we every truly do. We say we do, but in those quiet moments... I'm not so sure.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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giraffmang,
You at first are devastated and as time progresses, you learn to deal with it.
Journal it and redirect it to help those whom both suffer from their loss and promote...
"Organ-tissue Donations' like what my Son Jason did.
Ricky1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sad story of grief and a coming to terms with great loss, feelings of despair and sadness throughout your write, the shock is sometimes too much, I feel for you and sharing your feelings will help you heal, my best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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A sad story of grief and a coming to terms with great loss, feelings of despair and sadness throughout your write, the shock is sometimes too much, I feel for you and sharing your feelings will help you heal, my best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks Miss Dolly you are an Angel but where are you?
God keeps promising me an angel?
LOL!
Ricky1024