Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you for your nice review.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Such a cute, funny and ditsy poem, I adored it, so much fun, made me smile, excellent play on words, Good luck in the comp kindest regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thanks so much Meia :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh, this IS fun. Love the photo and your 5-7-5. So hard to get a smile from these short one, but I am sitting here smiling. Much luck in the contest. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you Marilyn, I appreciate your review. Happy to make you smile.

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

So so funny....especially to my family who makes fun of the looks on the faces of his deer on my son's wall. I can't wait to read this to them and show them the picture.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for your review, I'm happy you got a laugh. Hope your family does too.

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Cute and funny. The picture adds a lot to the poem. I like how the last line is unexpected. "What the hell! - Oh No!" It makes me chuckle. You surely had fun writing this one. Thanks for lightening my day.
Take care, Jesse

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Happy you had a good chuckle.

reply by Jesse James Doty on 04-Mar-2017

So am I!

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Deer in headlights...very funny photo. I hope that deer didn't fly
through your car. Be careful on the roads. We live in the country
and deer have killed people. Oh no, Honk!! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

I'm happy you liked it. I started laughing , when I read 'hope it didn't fly through the window. I live in the country as well, as a matter a fact about a month ago; a deer came running out, we slowed down quickly, a pick up truck was coming the opposite way at the same moment, after the deer crossed in front of my car, the truck hit it; the deer flew back towards my car and I got him. Luckily it wasn't as bad as the other guys truck. His truck was completely totaled, he kind of slide under my front bumper. I did get a souvenir. I took an antler that came off.

reply by flylikeaneagle on 05-Mar-2017

I saw two deer yesterday running carefree in the alley, church and down the street. Yes, the deer are beautiful. I pray that they stay in the fields when I drive. Be careful and glad you are safe! :)) nancy

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017

You be careful to Nancy; Have a great Sunday!

Comment from suep

Excellent

This made me smile ... both the artwork and your words. I'm sure many can relate. Lol. Good presentation. Fun read. Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you for such a pleasant review.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Don'cha just hate it when that happens Anoymous Author?
The one who's takin' your picture unexpectedly always seems to manage to catch you with your eyes shut, or in some God awful, wide opened, cross-eyed configuration.
It never fails.
Syllable count

Fun factor

Looks like all systems are go.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Your review made me laugh,lol. As I was reading it, I didn't know it was you yet, until I scrolled down. Thank you for the wonderful review, and for making me laugh. ~~~~~Mystery writer~~~~guess you'll know tomorrow who I am. :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Mar-2017

I guess I will.
You're very welcome.
Manya, then...
~Dean

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

:)

Comment from Aiona

Excellent

Me too! I have to be very aware that I'm doing that, but it still happens. Funny poem! And it fits the five-seven-five format, even!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you for your review, seems a lot of people out there can relate to this. Guess there's many of us who can't take a good photo if there life depended on it. lol

reply by Aiona on 04-Mar-2017

Y'know I just realized you spelled "Photograph" wrong..... completely missed that until just now. I gyess because I read fluent typo!

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

OMG! did I really, thank you so much I'll go fix that right away, It must of been a typo mistake

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Your a life saver, the g looked like a p I didn't notice

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Kerry, I couldn't resist reviewing this 5-7-5 piece. The picture got a smiling. So funny. I've got a visual on you right now - lol. Even funnier if you were photo bombing. Thanks for the giggle. ~DD

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Thank you, I am so happy you got a good laugh. lol. I can''t help but laugh myself, but then again I often crack myself up, and no one thinks it's funny, hey who care's.laughing good for the soul. curious how you knew my name?

reply by PoemsOfDD on 04-Mar-2017

You reviewed me and so I popped in to review you back :-) as a thank you. You and I have the 'laugh at ourselves' thing in common. I do that too, a lot. I'm the one that laughs the loudest when I'm out watching a movie with my kids. Who cares...I don't. My kids might though - lol ~DD

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

Oh, that's hilarious. I am the same my kids wont even go to the movies with me anymore they think I'm embarresing . I'll literally cry in laughter LOL. I'm glad we both have a good sense of humor. ha ha ha

reply by PoemsOfDD on 04-Mar-2017

Laugh out loud I say. :-)

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017

:))) :0