Two sides of the same coin.
Why disrespect the very symbol that ensures all rights?9 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written yes there are two sides to the coin and people should realise this when making there decisions I think I got this right but if not forgive me good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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This is very well written yes there are two sides to the coin and people should realise this when making there decisions I think I got this right but if not forgive me good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from William Ross
very good, great job on the acrostic for freedom. there are always those out to destroy our freedom. good luck on this and have a good day.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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very good, great job on the acrostic for freedom. there are always those out to destroy our freedom. good luck on this and have a good day.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem on freedom. There are always two sides to everything in life. Usually the one good and the other side not so good.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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A very well-written acrostic poem on freedom. There are always two sides to everything in life. Usually the one good and the other side not so good.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Good thought using a coin as the focal point to speak of the freedom we treasure. I was confused by "libertie's" as the plural is "liberties" but the possessive would be "liberty's" so wasn't sure which was meant. I thought a singular liberty/freedom was the topic. Good use of alliteration!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Good thought using a coin as the focal point to speak of the freedom we treasure. I was confused by "libertie's" as the plural is "liberties" but the possessive would be "liberty's" so wasn't sure which was meant. I thought a singular liberty/freedom was the topic. Good use of alliteration!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the keen eye.
Comment from pome lover
excellent! very well written.
Strong, well chosen words conveying a powerful message, using the letters in FREEDOM.
They flow effortlessly and meaningfully from line to line in righteous indignation.
BRAVO!
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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excellent! very well written.
Strong, well chosen words conveying a powerful message, using the letters in FREEDOM.
They flow effortlessly and meaningfully from line to line in righteous indignation.
BRAVO!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review and the bonus star.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a well constructed ode to patriotism, humanized by the foibles of man - an engaging view of the perils of power and the struggle for freedom, with independence and the value of the human spirit at risk - a masterful telling of our first days as a Nation...
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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In my opinion, a well constructed ode to patriotism, humanized by the foibles of man - an engaging view of the perils of power and the struggle for freedom, with independence and the value of the human spirit at risk - a masterful telling of our first days as a Nation...
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are most welcome...
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
E rase libertie's very essence. (liberty's)
How very true this is. We need to be thankful for and respectful of our freedom. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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E rase libertie's very essence. (liberty's)
How very true this is. We need to be thankful for and respectful of our freedom. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is a well written acrostic poem with a very meaningful message. It can apply to other countries asa well as ours. The presentation is symbolic of the title. Great job!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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This is a well written acrostic poem with a very meaningful message. It can apply to other countries asa well as ours. The presentation is symbolic of the title. Great job!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DonandVicki
This is probably one of the first acrosticstep that I have reviewed that has a patriotic feel to it, very well composed and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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This is probably one of the first acrosticstep that I have reviewed that has a patriotic feel to it, very well composed and enjoyable.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.