Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is very well written and beautifully presented expressing your thoughts in a positive way good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review Jill. The Orlando shooting was so sad, These people were enjoying their freedom and self expression only to be shot down by one man with such hatred. Cheers, j

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well written. The rhymes are smooth and the metaphoric reference to a rainbow is apparent throughout your poem. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review. We don't realize our freedoms until they are taken away, cheers, j

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Excellent rhyme and so well worded. An exceptional last line. Thoughtful and thought provoking write. Best of luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review. The Orlando tragedy was so sad. People just living their lives, enjoying the freedom of that and shot down by a shackled heart. j

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done on the freedom acrostic, good rhyming in here too. sometimes freedom has to many shackles. great job, good luck and have a great day.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review William. We don't realize our freedoms until they are gone it seems, cheers, j