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A Child loss16 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a tender and touching poem. I liked that you expressed comfort and hope especially in the last stanza.
I can't imagine a parents grief at loosing a child. It would be a heartbreaking experience. A good friend of mine lost one of her twin boys in a drowning accident which was horrible. But, it also almost destroyed her marriage. I learned that that is not uncommon in the loss of a child.
Well done dip.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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This is a tender and touching poem. I liked that you expressed comfort and hope especially in the last stanza.
I can't imagine a parents grief at loosing a child. It would be a heartbreaking experience. A good friend of mine lost one of her twin boys in a drowning accident which was horrible. But, it also almost destroyed her marriage. I learned that that is not uncommon in the loss of a child.
Well done dip.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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thankyou so much for the insightful review much appreciated. I too can't imagine losing a child It would be a tragedy for both parents and can cause grief with guilt from either parent I am sure especially a baby dying from SIDS or some other disease
I feel for your friend.
dip
Comment from foxangie123
It seems as if six stars and a thank you are not enough for the best ever write in the world. I did weep as I remembered my daughter and the tragedy now of my sick one but this is the most loving, caring, and beautiful write ever. God Bless You....
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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It seems as if six stars and a thank you are not enough for the best ever write in the world. I did weep as I remembered my daughter and the tragedy now of my sick one but this is the most loving, caring, and beautiful write ever. God Bless You....
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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You are so kind Angie. This review means so much to me and I am extremely sorry it had to hit an emotional chord under those circumstances I can't begin to know your pain but if i can pull on just one heart string feel and touch one emotion i have achieved my goal thank you again.
xxdip
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This poem is heartfelt and heartbreaking that I thought it was about your son. You made it seem real. Very well written.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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This poem is heartfelt and heartbreaking that I thought it was about your son. You made it seem real. Very well written.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Thankyou so much Gypsy You have made my day. Fortunately it is not about any of my kids but I just can't begin to imagine the pain someone would be going through with such a loss. Thankyou for the comments on such an emotive subject
dip
Comment from Louise Michelle
There is nothing worse than a parent losing her child, no matter what the age. My sister lost her grown son several years ago.
I'm so glad this has spiritual overtones. I do believe that their souls live on. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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There is nothing worse than a parent losing her child, no matter what the age. My sister lost her grown son several years ago.
I'm so glad this has spiritual overtones. I do believe that their souls live on. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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sorry to hear of her loss lou it is tragic and extremely sad. I wrote this for people such as your sister and can be taken as any gender. Thankyou for your comments they mean a lot to me
xdip
Comment from c_lucas
Death of a child is never easy to accept. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very sad read. Death is no respecter of persons. Rest in Piece.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Death of a child is never easy to accept. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very sad read. Death is no respecter of persons. Rest in Piece.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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Thankyou C I personally haven't experienced the loss of a child but I can only imagine the sadness and tragedy you would experience. Thanks for commenting
dip
Comment from tony bronk
This is written so well about such a sad story about your little boy leaving you at such an early age. I'm sorry for you but I hope this poem helps your pain. Tony
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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This is written so well about such a sad story about your little boy leaving you at such an early age. I'm sorry for you but I hope this poem helps your pain. Tony
Comment Written 24-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2016
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it was written to share among those who have experienced this
thankyou Tony for reviewing greatly appreciated
dip
Comment from daisyjones7
aww this brought tears to my eyes , really strong and emotional. Even though I have not experienced a child loss I could feel the tragedy through your poem, nice job wish you the best and keep up the good work
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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aww this brought tears to my eyes , really strong and emotional. Even though I have not experienced a child loss I could feel the tragedy through your poem, nice job wish you the best and keep up the good work
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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glad it touched an emotion with you. thanks for the supportive comments
dip
Comment from sage17611
This is a beautiful poem, it's extremely difficult dealing with the loss of a loved one, but when it's a child it can be unbearable. I like the fact that you wrote this poem in hopes that it would ease the pain of anyone who has lost a child. I really enjoyed reading this piece.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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This is a beautiful poem, it's extremely difficult dealing with the loss of a loved one, but when it's a child it can be unbearable. I like the fact that you wrote this poem in hopes that it would ease the pain of anyone who has lost a child. I really enjoyed reading this piece.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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thank you so much sage much appreciated
dip
Comment from Joan E.
I cannot imagine the depth of pain over losing a child. (I believe "too" lost its second "o" in the second line.) I admired your rhymed quatrains in a conversational style, along with your repeats for emphasis. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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I cannot imagine the depth of pain over losing a child. (I believe "too" lost its second "o" in the second line.) I admired your rhymed quatrains in a conversational style, along with your repeats for emphasis. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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thanks Joan I have fixed and tweaked another few lines as well think it reads better now
much appreciated
dip
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Thank you for letting me know that my note was useful and that you made the poem even better. -Joan
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thanks again
Comment from Pantygynt
The untimely death of a child, however caused, is always heartbreaking. From your notes it appears you wrote this for others who might be suffering rather than in memory of a personal tragedy, so on their behalf, thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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The untimely death of a child, however caused, is always heartbreaking. From your notes it appears you wrote this for others who might be suffering rather than in memory of a personal tragedy, so on their behalf, thank you.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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thats correct Panty its not a personal loss but I can only imagine how it would feel to lose a little one who has only just discovered the wonders of life
dip
