Act of Endurance
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Comment from Gianinas
You used a lot of words, a child would tell you...my friend, I am not child...
I liked these ones the most:
"My deemed be suffering in set afflictions, virtues be measured as me; them given to value: my worth."
Gianina
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2016
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You used a lot of words, a child would tell you...my friend, I am not child...
I liked these ones the most:
"My deemed be suffering in set afflictions, virtues be measured as me; them given to value: my worth."
Gianina
Comment Written 08-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2016
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Yeah, pits are my projects downfall. I'm trying to improve upon lesser features through revisions. Glad some aspects of these writes were interest to you. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating conveyances.
Comment from Nika2016
The poem is good with a unique placement of words, but it reads as someone who believes he is above others in truth. We are all beings made in the image of Him and revenge or teaching belongs to God. We are not prisoners in a body and only He can judge.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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The poem is good with a unique placement of words, but it reads as someone who believes he is above others in truth. We are all beings made in the image of Him and revenge or teaching belongs to God. We are not prisoners in a body and only He can judge.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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Sorry you thought this was personal, not a concept of flesh being. Do you know the answer to the question? Thanking you for generous rate and captivating views.
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Breath given by God alone...not for man to interfere.
Comment from William Ross
very nice, as man was formed from clay and had the breathe of life from god, given a soul. Nicely done. thanks for the look, have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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very nice, as man was formed from clay and had the breathe of life from god, given a soul. Nicely done. thanks for the look, have a wonderful day
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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My text studies confronted this issue which I applied throughout its account. Spirit live beyond flesh. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written spiritual poem. God made us from dirt the body is just a temporarily vessel to carry the soul. When we die the soul lives on and the body return to dust.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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A very well-written spiritual poem. God made us from dirt the body is just a temporarily vessel to carry the soul. When we die the soul lives on and the body return to dust.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
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Yes, this is the projected reality, and with this fact another probable existence to be known: us with and without our flesh. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from lalajovanoski
I found this piece to be truly amazing and is nicely composed as well. Thought provoking and insightful. Thanks so much for sharing this as I really enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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I found this piece to be truly amazing and is nicely composed as well. Thought provoking and insightful. Thanks so much for sharing this as I really enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Glad this write found interests. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating comments.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Poet states God molded him or her from dust of the land and breathed breath
into the body. Writer pays reverence to Jesus and His burden he carried and died on the Cross so that others would live, so that mankind would be forgiven of their sins. liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
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Poet states God molded him or her from dust of the land and breathed breath
into the body. Writer pays reverence to Jesus and His burden he carried and died on the Cross so that others would live, so that mankind would be forgiven of their sins. liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2016
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Thanking you for generous rate and encouraging statements. Glad this write touched you.