thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "God Mends a Broken Heart"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from songecho
Life is a highway. I hear your words, and you melt everyone, but you stay so cool.
You're a heartbreaker, dream maker, love taker; don't you mess around with me.
If I had my way we'd never close our eyes. Look up to the sky and see.
I'm here to tell you your body is perfect; every inch from the bottom to the top.
I see no body but you.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Life is a highway. I hear your words, and you melt everyone, but you stay so cool.
You're a heartbreaker, dream maker, love taker; don't you mess around with me.
If I had my way we'd never close our eyes. Look up to the sky and see.
I'm here to tell you your body is perfect; every inch from the bottom to the top.
I see no body but you.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your review.and rating, you review your review and
Comment from risktaker
Sorry for your loss. My friend passed this week and left her beloved dog. I am concerned about her grieving process missing her owner.Mu friend loved that dog like her own child. They gave each other many hours of love, companionship, and support. Your imagery is vivid and your message clear.Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Sorry for your loss. My friend passed this week and left her beloved dog. I am concerned about her grieving process missing her owner.Mu friend loved that dog like her own child. They gave each other many hours of love, companionship, and support. Your imagery is vivid and your message clear.Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind rating,review and comments.We do love our pets as one of our children.
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