The Panda
Non-fiction educational.Panda16 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This was so interesting to me because I have always adored Panda bears and for many years i collected them in miniature form. I pray we can keep them alive. to lose them would be such a shame. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
This was so interesting to me because I have always adored Panda bears and for many years i collected them in miniature form. I pray we can keep them alive. to lose them would be such a shame. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review this and give me such a nice comment. I put a lot of work into this.
Comment from Begin Again
Wow! You did your homework while researching our cuddly friends. I have always loved the panda and their comical ways, but you've taught me so much more. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
Wow! You did your homework while researching our cuddly friends. I have always loved the panda and their comical ways, but you've taught me so much more. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for very nice review.
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read Sis. You must have done some really heavy research on this. I did see more errors in the story and a lot of repetition could be cut down. Here is the initial bit I noted. in the shade-dappled snowy and rocky (locations)of their habitat.
If you want I could go through again and detail the repetitious areas but maybe you can read it yourself and you will find them.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
This was a great read Sis. You must have done some really heavy research on this. I did see more errors in the story and a lot of repetition could be cut down. Here is the initial bit I noted. in the shade-dappled snowy and rocky (locations)of their habitat.
If you want I could go through again and detail the repetitious areas but maybe you can read it yourself and you will find them.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Thanks for the review. Any corrections will have to wait until after I recover for my eye surgery which is on Jan 7th
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Patricia,
I really enjoyed reading all about the Panda a most beautiful animal. It would be so sad to see them become extinct. It was a interesting write, I learned a thing or two.
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
Hi Patricia,
I really enjoyed reading all about the Panda a most beautiful animal. It would be so sad to see them become extinct. It was a interesting write, I learned a thing or two.
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
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Thank you Mary for the nice review. It would indeed be a shame to lose these lovely animals.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love your stories and am always ready to learn more and you don't disappoint me in helping me along.
Amazing report and facts.
Very well written
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
I love your stories and am always ready to learn more and you don't disappoint me in helping me along.
Amazing report and facts.
Very well written
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2015
Thank you Barb for the review, Happy New Year.
Comment from Deniz22
Big deal! I knew all this stuff...and if they're so "endangered" why are there three of them living in my garage? And they never clean up after themselves...maybe they ARE endangered after all...my foot slips and I step on the gas instead of the brake when driving into the garage? :)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
Big deal! I knew all this stuff...and if they're so "endangered" why are there three of them living in my garage? And they never clean up after themselves...maybe they ARE endangered after all...my foot slips and I step on the gas instead of the brake when driving into the garage? :)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Dennis you are just being funny. Thanks for the review.
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At least you didn't say TRYING to be funny...:)
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No, I am nice, even though the thought was running around in my feeble brain. :-)
Comment from emrpoems
A good lesson on the panda.I have learnt a lot from your series and must thank you for your thoughtfulness
I look forward to reading about other animals in the new year
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
A good lesson on the panda.I have learnt a lot from your series and must thank you for your thoughtfulness
I look forward to reading about other animals in the new year
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the nice review. I may do the elephant or the kangaroo next.
Comment from GracieAnn
Pat, this is a very informative write that is written with solid research and interest. Amazing how each animal has God's specific fingerprint. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
Pat, this is a very informative write that is written with solid research and interest. Amazing how each animal has God's specific fingerprint. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Thanks gracieAnn for the review. I am glad you found it informative. I write the nature essays in such a way that children could enjoy reading them.
Comment from Nosha17
Pandas are just so interesting and cuddly! Very informative essay. Good use of descriptive language and good factual knowledge. I spotted 2 errors, Para 14, digestive tract..........its diet affects....Most enjoyable. Faye
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
Pandas are just so interesting and cuddly! Very informative essay. Good use of descriptive language and good factual knowledge. I spotted 2 errors, Para 14, digestive tract..........its diet affects....Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Thanks you for the nice review. it was a fun nature study and I learned a lot about pandas.
Comment from misscookie
I love the photo you choose to go with your write.
it is a awesome match.
I was always found of panders since I was a youg lady
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
I love the photo you choose to go with your write.
it is a awesome match.
I was always found of panders since I was a youg lady
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 31-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
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Thank you miss Cookie for the nice review I am glad yu enjoyed it.
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You're very welcome. Have a blessed day.
Cookie