Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Three Stages of Death"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Misrael
That is so sad and in some cases true I suppose. But it makes me want to cry because it sounds so final. Good read and keep up the good work
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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That is so sad and in some cases true I suppose. But it makes me want to cry because it sounds so final. Good read and keep up the good work
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Misrael.
Comment from steevie
interesting poem, A
there is power in simplicity and you have harnessed this venue to your advantage
good job, sis
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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interesting poem, A
there is power in simplicity and you have harnessed this venue to your advantage
good job, sis
smiles
steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Steve.
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You are most welcome
steve
Comment from lynglyng
Very good at capturing so much emotion from such a short poem. Very well done with a message that is clearly presented. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Very good at capturing so much emotion from such a short poem. Very well done with a message that is clearly presented. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you, lynglyng.