The Voyager
A poem describing myself143 total reviews
Comment from Poetofheart2013
your poem is very good about you I like how you
put everything together so well. everything just flows
really good.
Good Job
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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your poem is very good about you I like how you
put everything together so well. everything just flows
really good.
Good Job
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you poet.
Comment from Bundhoo
Great ! Great ! Great !
Your poem is really nice and beautifully written, your poem grips the reader all along!!
Regards,
MARWA;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Great ! Great ! Great !
Your poem is really nice and beautifully written, your poem grips the reader all along!!
Regards,
MARWA;)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Marwa.
Comment from rouskin
My heart is beating so intensely
With every step I take.
Jesus, I give you my spirit and my soul
For I know I am yours, never to forsake
You wrote not only a nice poem but it seems like sermon to me. All Time Best is fully deserved. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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My heart is beating so intensely
With every step I take.
Jesus, I give you my spirit and my soul
For I know I am yours, never to forsake
You wrote not only a nice poem but it seems like sermon to me. All Time Best is fully deserved. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Rouskin.
Comment from gudbjorg
It touched my heart to read your poem, its really deep and deals with the innermost part of your being, your fears, your struggles and battles with your thoughts and doubts. I consider this not a fantasy but a real struggle between good and evil. The real battle goes on but God has given us supernatural power to withstand the onslaught of the enemy and help us to win, "with God's power within."
Your poem is well written, and has a good flow and sequence and rhyme. Well done
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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It touched my heart to read your poem, its really deep and deals with the innermost part of your being, your fears, your struggles and battles with your thoughts and doubts. I consider this not a fantasy but a real struggle between good and evil. The real battle goes on but God has given us supernatural power to withstand the onslaught of the enemy and help us to win, "with God's power within."
Your poem is well written, and has a good flow and sequence and rhyme. Well done
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you GUD.
Comment from Curly Girly
We all have inner conflicts at one stage or another. But we should trust and believe in faith. Sometimes it's hard. When we are weak, we can lean on the Lord.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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We all have inner conflicts at one stage or another. But we should trust and believe in faith. Sometimes it's hard. When we are weak, we can lean on the Lord.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Curly.
Comment from Maustin
"My heart is beating so intensely
With every step I take.
Jesus, I give you my spirit and my soul
For I know I am yours, never to forsake. "
A very powerful and moving work. Wow! This stanza is sooo moving. Great write. I enjoyed and was touched.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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"My heart is beating so intensely
With every step I take.
Jesus, I give you my spirit and my soul
For I know I am yours, never to forsake. "
A very powerful and moving work. Wow! This stanza is sooo moving. Great write. I enjoyed and was touched.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Maustin.
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So welcome ,)
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you for sharing your struggle to find your identity with God in your life. Good good alliteration and abcb rhyme throughout this well written piece. Good picture and presentation to enhance your work.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for sharing your struggle to find your identity with God in your life. Good good alliteration and abcb rhyme throughout this well written piece. Good picture and presentation to enhance your work.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Janet.
Comment from DRG24
This is a really interesting story in a poem!!! I like how the background contrasts from the red!!!!!! I think that it is a really great job!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is a really interesting story in a poem!!! I like how the background contrasts from the red!!!!!! I think that it is a really great job!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you DR.
Comment from mystery poet
Life is the same it seems with or without
our dedication to God. The difference is...
He will see us through all. Life is not meant
to be easy...my theology...Jesus walking the
path with us gives us the strength, courage
and even ingenuity to succeed. Your journey
in poetic verve is profound. Thank you.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Life is the same it seems with or without
our dedication to God. The difference is...
He will see us through all. Life is not meant
to be easy...my theology...Jesus walking the
path with us gives us the strength, courage
and even ingenuity to succeed. Your journey
in poetic verve is profound. Thank you.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you poet.
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A pleasure!
LOL::}}Joyce
Comment from sunnilicious
Nice illustration. Great poem. Nice form. Well thought out and clearly written into a narrative. Good rhythm and rhymes. Spiritually uplifting. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Nice illustration. Great poem. Nice form. Well thought out and clearly written into a narrative. Good rhythm and rhymes. Spiritually uplifting. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you Sunni.