Comment from Terry Broxson

Exceptional

This is so dang good. I don't know whether it is a parody, satire, or something that doesn't need classification. What a great creative poem merging the nursery rhyme with the famous mystery game. Exceptional. Terry.

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Terry Broxson,
Thank you so much for the six stars and the fun comments. I appreciate the encouragement.
Debi

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This poem is cute and very creative. I thought I was a fan and guess I'm not. I will correct that right now. I enjoyed reading this poem and thank you for sharing it with us.

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Barbara,
I'm glad you liked the poem. Thank you for the excellent review and encouraging comments. Thank you for becoming a fan.
Debi

Comment from jenintorre

Exceptional

Ha ha ha. This is genius. I love it and the punch line is great. When I first started reading it I thought this should be an entry for the children's poem contest then realized no it shouldn't. Faaabulous. Jen.

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Jen,
Thank you so much for the six stars and the encouraging comments. I love the comment about thinking the poem should be for a children's contest, but realizing it shouldn't. Yep, it might be disturbing to little ones.
Have a great day.
Debi

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

Well, your poem is an interesting combination of two things I'm not sure I would have ever thought to put together. It's an imaginative take on a fairy tale. Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Faith Williams,
Thank you for the kind comments and analysis.
Have a great day.
Debi

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Exceptional

This is such a fun and clever take on the Humpty fairy tale. It just gets more humorous with each line as your write of the evil ones planning his demise. Wonderful use of your imagination. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Ginda Simpson,
Thank you for such an awesome review. I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it humorous. I appreciate the shiny six stars to brighten my day.
Debi

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Exceptional

This is absolutely awesome! I love the rhyme, I love the flow, I love the inclusion of the various elements. All in all, amazing work! I don't know if this was for a contest, but if it was I hope you won.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Monica,
Thank you for the six stars and for such encouraging comments. You brightened my day with both.
Debi

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is very cute. As part of masters degree in literacy, I read variations of several fairy tales and this one rivals any I've read. You have such a creative story. I truly enjoyed reading it!

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Hi Alexandra Trovato,
What a nice thing to say. I'm honored that you enjoyed reading it.
Debi

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

You got me chuckling with this little ditty it is quite nifty to blame poor Cornal Mustard! Scarlet is harlot to be gone with the wind. Really!at least the egg didn't go to waste and he got a feast that day. Dumpty is safe once again.Humpty Dumpty is now safe.
Nice presentation
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

I'm so glad you enjoyed this silly rhyme and had a good chuckle. Love the Gone With the Wind reference you made.
Thank you for the shiny six stars and for the amazing comments.
Debi

reply by country ranch writer on 29-May-2023

Smiles

reply by country ranch writer on 29-May-2023

Smiles

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

This is such a cute poem. I never thought that it could have been Col Mustard who did him in. He did want tall the kings men couldn't do, put Humpty back together again. Really well done, very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Hi Roxanna Andrews,
I am glad you enjoyed this silliness. It was just one of those things that begged to be written.
Have a great day.
Debi

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A wonderful compilation of nursery rhyme characters and Cluedo (Clue in the US) in your very creative poem. It reads smoothly and well and is a lot of fun. Well poor Humpty - he did have a heart of gold but it was just golden yolk. Very enjoyable read. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Hi Wendy,
I'm so glad you enjoyed this silly one. It was fun combining the nursery rhyme with the game. I think I drove my parents crazy as a kid because I loved to play Clue so much. Still do, if I can talk anyone into playing it with me instead of video games.
Have a great day.
Debi