thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Worship"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
7 total reviews
Comment from Liz Dunbee
This is a lovely poem with a beautiful picture to go with it. I like 'Jesus to safely guide us home' This is a very sweet and comforting line. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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This is a lovely poem with a beautiful picture to go with it. I like 'Jesus to safely guide us home' This is a very sweet and comforting line. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review and kind words hope you have a bless day
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A well written spiritual affirmation.
A testament to God's love for us that he would send his only son to save us.
Written to suit the ABC poetry format and well presented.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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A well written spiritual affirmation.
A testament to God's love for us that he would send his only son to save us.
Written to suit the ABC poetry format and well presented.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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thank you for your review and kindness.God bless
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this . It is so true and succinctly said....................instead He had to send............Jesus to safely guide us home....well said
Thank you and God bless...........................................................................
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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I love this . It is so true and succinctly said....................instead He had to send............Jesus to safely guide us home....well said
Thank you and God bless...........................................................................
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and kind words God bless
Comment from allborn66
I realize the form can be limiting but there seems to be a serious transition issue between the second and third line. I'm not sure how to fix it - I'm not totally with it to do to think up a good "I" line - but it should be some reason why people need Jesus.
Barbara
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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I realize the form can be limiting but there seems to be a serious transition issue between the second and third line. I'm not sure how to fix it - I'm not totally with it to do to think up a good "I" line - but it should be some reason why people need Jesus.
Barbara
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review I appreciate it. God bless
Comment from MzNiki
Amen!! Well said, and so creatively put! Excellent presentation in its entirety! Easy read made it so enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.....Keep up the groovy work (*_*)!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Amen!! Well said, and so creatively put! Excellent presentation in its entirety! Easy read made it so enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.....Keep up the groovy work (*_*)!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and rating I am thankful.God bless
Comment from Kidlike101
Nice poem but I don't understand why the "instead" was there other then for the letter I. "Instead he had to send"
Might want to revise it for the contest so that the verse before it would tie in with this one.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Nice poem but I don't understand why the "instead" was there other then for the letter I. "Instead he had to send"
Might want to revise it for the contest so that the verse before it would tie in with this one.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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o-k thank you for your review,
Comment from c_lucas
A very well written ABC poem. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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A very well written ABC poem. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2013
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Thank you for your review and great rating I do appreciate it God bless
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You're welcome, SM. Charlie