Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This something beautiful and mysterious about waterfalls. I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed well and the rhyming scheme is very good. Good job.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you. They do seem to have a mysterious effect on me~Debbie

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Hi Debbie-do

I was impressed with your enjambment between your last two stanzas:
And my soul will forever fill/Full of love for all and sharing

There is nice alliteration there too(forever fill full)

Fine rhyming quatrains with even tempo.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks so much, Ellen~Debbie

Comment from tedanytime

Excellent

This waterfall poem reveals great insight...
Water traveling over falls and rocky rapids is cleansed and refreshed with oxygen...purified.
Our minds and souls must be rushed through rough places to slough off some inner impurity.

"When you next hear a waterfall
You will make sense of this all"

Fine conclusion!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Debbie,
I am happy to have taken this journey with you... I love waterfalls and the soothing sounds of running water... So your metaphors were strong and leave a powerful message for self-growth... well penned my good friend... Love your positive!
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

Oh I do so agree. there si something almost magical about a waterfall, maybe magical isn't the word but it has such power. Great poem. God lovesyou and I do too.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much. Have a blessed evening~Debbie

Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid

Excellent

Aloha from Hawaii Debbie,
I love the relaxing feeling that comes from reading your poem. Waterfalls are a wonderful place to go to recharge your spirit. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written my friend you have expressed your thoughts with so much feeling through out I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Hi Debbie,

Such a beautiful poem. Even though waterfalls are very noisy, they give us a sense of calm and peace. Good job!

A never(-)ending source of pleasure

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks so much, Lois for the review and catching my spag. Hugs

reply by mumsyone on 21-Aug-2013

Hi Debbie,

By the way, I saw your senryu in Prune Juice. Good work there!

Hugs,
Lois

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thanks so much!!! Debbie

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

A waterfall is a most magnificent scene to be fortunate enough to visit on and marvel at its magnificence. A lovely poem well written I enjoyed it.


Gone are the worries of today
Tomorrow's not yet on the way
'Tis the time to listen and be still
And my soul will forever fill

Full of love for all and sharing
With understanding and caring
When you next hear a waterfall
You will make sense of this all

Well done. Mary

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

You have certainly hit a soft spot with me. Waterfalls and rainbows are my favorites. You did a wonderful job writing this one. I could hear the tinkling of the water as it rippled over the rocks and fell to the little river below. It has a way of 'refreshing the mind'. Ridding of self doubt and letting creativity come out. Nicely done, Carolyn

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013

Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie