Comment from Econ Teacher

Excellent

This poem sums up the name of Jesus pretty well. He is the savior and he is all the other attributes given to him. I can't really think of anything else to offer.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013

Thank you for your review,yes he is I would not want to live without him

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

"Lo, I am with you, always." One of Jesus' greatest promises. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013

Thank you for your review and luck I appreciate them both.

reply by c_lucas on 08-Aug-2013

You're welcome. Charlie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

A solid acrostic for Jesus for the Bible acrostic contest
I like your minimalist approach
Each word works well with nothing forced in capturing the sweet spirit of Jesus :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013

Thank you for your review and kind words they mean a lot

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

This is a very nicely written acrostic poem with very good descriptive words spelling out your subject, Jesus. It meets all of the criteria, and is enjoyed.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013

Thank you for you review and encouraging words