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FATE -- Fortune Admission Test Exam

No escape from the FATE. Please read Notes. 262 words

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Comment from ruzu27
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I tend to worry about things I cannot change. But then, I sit down and tell myself to let go, it's fate, everything is looked after and think whatever direction
it goes, I'll find a way.

Then I can let go and feel I have a help! I believe in fate. Thank you for sharing.
Ruth

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your fiction thoughts about fate and found it real interesting here are my thoughts--

I do not believe in a fate that falls on us however when we don't act; but I do believe when fate that falls on us ~ we should act which, will help lead us to the heavenly gates

Gert


 Comment Written 21-Aug-2013

Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
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Fate and destiny go hand in hand... and you know what? I don't ever want to live forever not in heaven and not in hell, I would rather live this life we have and be immortal only in the memory and hearts that I love and care for, nothing more... I welcome death he is a good friend, why run from something that is inevitable? Well that is how I look at it, live and be good to those around you, the world is your country, all mankind are your brethren and to do good is my religion :)

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2013

Comment from Titanx9
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The Bible says narrow is the road that will lead to His heaven. Many folks believe the can do all manners of terrible things on earth and be rewarded by G-d and get a place in heaven. As you note, "...they neither practiced nor maintained the righteous living as per God words." I wish I knew more about your dream; it sounds beautiful, on the one hand, and daunting on the other. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2013

Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Al,

I got a bit lost in your words but I do understand what you mean. I had to read it twice before it made sense to me. You have a way of turning a phrase using odd and profound words. I wish you would answer your reviews as I never know if I understand your thoughts or not....chey

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2013

Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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I agree that life is governed by fate
but hope that Heaven is a far better
place than here on earth - and only
God will decide if we are to enter
through those gates.

Margaret

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2013

Comment from emjaihammond
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What is a Fate Qualifier? I'm a bit lost in this one. Is a fate qualifier something that makes you acceptable in God's eyes? I believe only Jesus can do that. I am not sure what you are trying to say.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2013

Comment from garrymc5
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Here are your writing problems:
---FATE qualifier is not a know phase. Therefore the reader must guess, or you must explain.

the FATE. ---is also not a know phase. Same again
as per God words. ---you mean God's?
to answer to follow explanation, --- impossible to answer, to follow explanation. Rewrite.
There are different categories of inhabitants in Heaven. --This is pure speculation. If it is to have any meaning, it must be explain.

There is no story tellings sense to the work. Take a look at other writes, the top three, for example, to see how story is told. Learn from them.



 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

Comment from c_lucas
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The way you live your life will decide your after life. This is uniquely written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013

Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer delivers a message filled with knowledge, wisdom and understanding. The message in this piece is deep and serves as a blue print to the Father. I see no typos or errors nor anything I would change in this piece. Good job.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2013