thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "My son"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
3 total reviews
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry tugs at the heart. A deadly illness diagnosis
for a child is always painful, unforgettable, and life
altering. Many readers will relate to this poetry. Thank
You for your creation.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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This poetry tugs at the heart. A deadly illness diagnosis
for a child is always painful, unforgettable, and life
altering. Many readers will relate to this poetry. Thank
You for your creation.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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thank you for your review. it was painful but i know god knows what is best. i just put my trust in him and i know he will help whatever troubles i may encounter.
Comment from The Fan
Raw and direct. Ask not why he has cancer but what are you to learn from the situation so as to help others in the same circumstances. We are all there to help each other along the way. We live, we learn, we share. To be or not to be.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Raw and direct. Ask not why he has cancer but what are you to learn from the situation so as to help others in the same circumstances. We are all there to help each other along the way. We live, we learn, we share. To be or not to be.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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thank you for your review. if i have learned anything in this life i have walked it would be that god is good and he knows what is best.
Comment from The Death
Hello
It's really very disheartening and sad to know about him and your pain and faith are both visible here.
You have well used quatrains with variable rhyme scheme.
We may sometimes find it very difficult to face hard situations,but we must have faith,and I am sure He will always be there for you and your son.
Take care
Regards
Shar-A
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Hello
It's really very disheartening and sad to know about him and your pain and faith are both visible here.
You have well used quatrains with variable rhyme scheme.
We may sometimes find it very difficult to face hard situations,but we must have faith,and I am sure He will always be there for you and your son.
Take care
Regards
Shar-A
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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i am thankful for all of the reviews I received for my poem my son God is good and my son is doing well now.If I have learned anything in the road of life is that God is in control and we must beleive he knows what is best