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Hiding The Remote

Playful gestures of a child.......

5 total reviews 
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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This is very typical of what actually happens in many homes. Kids like to hide things on Mum and Dad. It's a cute poem and appropriate for the competition, good luck. Giddy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and great comments!
Comment from trimple
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Cheeky little monkey! smashing little entry for the prompt.
I sensed that you really did consider the mind set of a little girl hiding her dads remote in order to grab a hug when he finally found it.
Good luck
trimple

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and great comments!
Comment from marre5
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I think you succeeded in capturing the world seen through a child's eyes. Very charming.

Picture is picture-perfect! Very impish which is how you portrayed her.

Last line I would change to hugs.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
    Thank you for your review and comments.
    Hope you had a great weekend!
Comment from barkingdog
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This is funny that the daughter wants to play a trick on her Dad and hide the remote. She turned the whole thing into a game.
I love the picture.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for your excellent review and comments!
    Glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from kiwijenny
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The worst week I remember was when a 3 year old niece hid my husbands remote. He ended up lifting the recliner ,tipping it upside down and shaking til the remote dropped out...but it was a week of frustration:o)
I like this and that it ended in a hug.
God bless

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
    Thank you so much for your excellent review and comments.
    I loved your comments and I thought about when my children were young they were always losing the remote! I can identify with your frustration. Have a good week! Thanks....