Comment from webfoot

Excellent

Hi Kerri

Welcome - it's good to see you in my home site and writing poetry - a nice 575, keep it up

I heard your first collaboration with RG - it gave me goosebumps

you two will go far together, I feel

best of luck
glenda

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you so much Glenda. Only just come on here, so haven't seen it yet. Going to have a look now . Can't wait :)

Kerri

reply by webfoot on 23-Nov-2014

yes, it's wonderful. I think I found a photographer/artist for you two, to complete your projects in an original way

reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Oh that would be amazing! It's a minefield out there trying to find photos etc that are OK to use (in the Public Domain) sometimes its not always clear if they are or not, so having someone on board would make life so much easier :)
Thank you Glenda, your a star

God Bless...Kerri

reply by webfoot on 23-Nov-2014

yes. I just got an email from Mara(artist) - seems she's onboard.

all the best, Kerri

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

That is a very wise philosophy indeed, unless you wish to
join the Dead Poet's Society.
Correct to 5-7-5 format.
Very clever and amusing.
A worthy entry.

 Comment Written 19-May-2013

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reply by the author on 20-May-2013

Many thanks for your review. Glad you liked my offering.

With very good luck and best wishes...?

reply by Rmocruz on 20-May-2013

You're welcome.

Comment from playinaround

Excellent

Not sure of the total meaning of this senryu. More descriptive words would add to the understanding. But at the same time, I like the humor.

 Comment Written 19-May-2013

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reply by the author on 20-May-2013

Very many thanks for your review. I will try using more descriptive words in future. Many thanks for your feedback.

With good luck and good wishes...?